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So what year did this take place? Where is the weather details? Where is the lighting and shadows? Are they in a restaurant? So Rarity heads to the Castle? was it Sunny? Raining? Snowing? Windy? Did Rarity walk to the castle or did she run? As I get to the 67th through 69th paragraph you use past tense. you use ed as in past tense while it should be just an s.
Not bad, I could actually see this as a real Friends Forever issue. But there could be more detail in spots.
I enjoyed to read this fiction, I like it a lot.
A very nice shot, and sweet story. I can't wait for tomorrow's episode to completely destroy it.
7514619 It didn't.
The show really needs to have an episode pairing Spike and Shining Armor together like this!
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Totally true!