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WorldSmith


Comments ( 17 )

That was good...please continue!

I just see some capitalization errors, nothing else.
Great story, I hope to see more :D

Great story I like the way you portrayed Shining Armor

d'aww...a short, sweet one off that earned a fave and a thumbs up.

Good lord at this rate the pharmaceutical companies are gonna own my soul at the rate I'm having to use up my insulin :ajsleepy:..........But this has got to be one of the most dawwww worthy stories I have had the pleasure of reading. Keep up the good work, hope to see more from you, and you have more than earned the watch and favorite:pinkiehappy:

"Night light gave a look Shining assumed was supposed to be a comforting smile..."

This was the only mistake I noticed. Awesome story!

Author’s Note

Once again thank you for taking the time to read my fic! This is only my second fic and it hasn’t been pre-read since it was just a little short thing I wanted to get out before Saturday. So please point out every single mistake you can find! If you think you’re nit picking you’re not. It’s the only way I can get better.

Well that was a pretty silly rush then, it doesn't air for another 9 days! :pinkiehappy:

444470 Wow I feel dumb then, I haven't paid any attention to the air date I just assumed it was this weekend. :derpytongue2: Well whats done is done and everyone seems to think its ok anyway so it's all good :twilightsmile:

Also fixed capitalization errors in Night Light's name.

HOLY CRAP I HAVNT WATCHED THE NEW EPISODE YET BYE!!!

No wonder there's no dislikes. :twilightsmile:

445530 Awe that's so sweet thank you! :pinkiesmile:

What is this emotion I feel?

Sparky>Twili

Well done.

One of the greatest things about family

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