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why must you torture us?!
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you knew what you were getting into
What's dead dove do not eat mean? *Googles* Oh, okay.
Naughty, brony! Bad! Nno! *swats with paper*
Excellent grammar and wording, though. This sort of thing fascinates me by how uncomfortable and repulsed it makes me.
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its a kaleidoscope of squick
5977846 I think I get it. If I hated something or somebody, I might write this sort of thing as revenge, maybe against a certain group or society or maybe against myself. I might want a reason to condemn others, anyone who fails to heed the vague warning I place on the story's front page, the same way I was dragged into whatever predicament has me upset with the world, in order to justify my loneliness or misery to myself. I'd keep the ending less miserable than the action because I put enough effort into it that I wouldn't want to just leave the story without any redeeming quality, and because I'd be conflicted about my rage. The characters would be an extension of myself. Aware that it's fiction, but unwilling to escape from it, no matter how uncomfortable, because then I'd have to admit I was wrong.
But enough about me. Have yourself a lovely day!
5977766 yeah...
Awesome!
But it would have been ten times more awesome with diamond dogs.
How about an alternative end?
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i dunno i kinda wrote it because it was hot?
also uh
thats a pretty specific warning on the story front page
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don't worry, this isn't the last 'pony used as urinal' story from me by a long shot!
I rather enjoyed it.
Oooh, can we have a canon colt or more than one of them feature in a story? Like Snips and Snails? They rarely get any love from authors.
And if you want to go really evil, you could have the latter brace open the filly's mouth and threaten to feed her slugs and worms if she doesn't comply.
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bronystories got the whole 'nonconsensual snips and snails watersports' game nailed already but i kinda see the appeal. might give them a cameo in a later tale
It became amazing when she finally obeyed. I hope next night this dream will continue. Fillies are the best urinals.
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you are a terrible, awful person and exactly the kind of reader this terrible, awful story is aimed at. thank you for the praise!
follow me for more filly urinal action!
Well... at least I don't like Diamond Tiara.
Make more stories like this :I
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that's the plan! anything you particularly like about them?
6009232 I just enjoy your writing style of clop
Wasn't bad by any means, and it's interesting to read. Not sure if I want to fav it just yet, but it definitely deserves an upvote.
Hmm... I feel strangely....satisfied...with myself, for enjoying the torture...
The mind can make such bruises real, yet Ms Rarity played the same catch and release games with her young victims in "Tarnished Silver" series by Ham Gravy, so we may never know if it was real or a dream. Rarity's victims had the same problem the first few times she abducted them and Silver Spoon helped torture and rape them into submission.
well done. I have to admit I enjoyed this despite being much more sympathetic then most bronies (ah it was so much easier when I just hated her like everyone else, simpler times) I'm happy that she got to go home but I sincerely want to see her in the sex slave roll. Her master could abduct her at the time of the party and only after she's fulfilled her role, be returned to her home, a changed filly.
Maybe even bring Silver Spoon into the mix?
Maybe once they are broken fully then they will be sold, and actually looking forward to it. Gawd I'm a sick fuck.
I'm not particularly fond of watersports and riming and the like, but diamond tiara is a real bitch and needs to be punished. Why couldn't you of had her dad sell her to the tormenters for an obscene amount of money? Or maybe have the stallion stick a curling iron up her pussy with a vibrating ring on it and plug it in and watch the fun and comedic hilarity. Hopefully she will learn kindness and humility from this discipline.
6182464 No your being to kind.
Hot diggity dog! Hot story, perfect story to break in my new tenga.
Nasty...
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if you can keep your lunch, when everybody else is losing theirs...
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"Then you straight."
"What?"
"Nothing, Nothing, Just a little material I read..."
Am I a bad person for being interested in this?
Maybe. Maybe not. Either way, 'tis was feisty, just how I like it.
This story was quote the thing... If there is a sequel, I might just create a new account just to fave it again. XD.
Nan, I really liked it, even tho I found it quite disturbing...
Finding joy in forbidden fruits are quite the thrill now, for me...
The habit might die down in a month or two. :')
Great story btw
Ermigersh. Why in Equestria did I get turned on by this??
I need to pee now.
that was horrible and disgusting and i clopped to it at like five in the morning. ugh i hate myself....*upvotes*
That was one of the worst things I've ever read but it was written really well so you get a like.
Oh, how I enjoy being a sick fuck. I get to read masterpieces like this! Upvote for you.
I'm a sick, sick fuck. Haha, but y'know, 'tis the internet. Nobody will know who is behind the screen reading this sick shit.
It's so good and I like it so much. I'm sick
What's with the ending? What kind of twist was that? So it was all true?
(I didn't mean to read this story! I'm not a sick fuck!)
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so has it died down?
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Far from close. I think that, I'm now too deep down the rabbit hole, to return to those mundane stories I used to read.
Clop-fic is still not my thing. But add «torture», and I might give it a try.
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im back to read this story again, figured I check up on you?
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Well, now it's even worse than before. I'm a fan of tragic fictions.
And if the story has a well written character, especially a foal, then I'm all for throwing my free time away in order to read some.
A friend of mine said that I'm now a lolicon. Welp! At least, I don't shame people any-more, for writing stories involving actions that the public might find disturbing.
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im glad there are more fucked up people in the world
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Normal is just too over-rated.
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Huh!? Would you care to elaborate? That is, if you wish to reveal a fraction of your twisted mind for all of us to bear witness to?