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Poor Pinkie Pie. She just can't catch a break in my stories, can she? :pinkiesad2:
First Prince Blueblood and now this.

Nope, not even gonna click on it. Not. At. All...

This story frightens me :pinkiesad2:

Not even a second gone by and a thumbs up :P
Guys, read it first xD Though at least it got a positive! :D

Commence read.

Well that was interesting.

Seems like Trixie should be shown a lesson. You could do another story in response where Pinkie or Twilight get revenge.

Oh sweet lord that is fucked up in the best way. Wierd as shit. You always come up with such whacked out shit.

1979420
I was actually showing restraint with this story. My initial idea involved Trixie chewing on Pinkie's severed vagina like an oyster. I also had plans for Trixie to force Pinkie to swallow her own disembodied asshole.

Trust me, this story could've been much darker and creepier. :pinkiecrazy:

Thanks for the feedback! :yay:

Trixie is Blueblood-lite

1979441 I wouldn't be surprised

1979441
I'm actually glad it didn't, while it doesn't bother me, it just doesn't hold my interest.
Rape/emotional/physical abuse rustles my jimmies, but unlike most I know not to
direct that indignation toward the author. I tend to connect with the characters
more than most readers which can cause either squick or rage at the attacker depending
on the scene such as those in FOE:PH, or the fic Cadence's Gift. This one didn't do
any rustling due to sheer ridiculousness of it, plenty of wtflol moments.

1979390
Gotta remember there are people out there watching authors ready to thumbs up
or thumbs down the second something is posted to show their fanboism or their
misplaced moral outrage.

Another great story. I swear, you write the most unique clop I've ever read and you never fail to surprise and fascinate me with your stories. This was just completely right for all the wrong reasons >.>

~Have a good one,

Warning rape and piss

nope
just fucking nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope

That was strange, which is the norm for a Bronystories production.

I didn't see Trixie's self minstrations coming though. I expected her to butt fuck Snips and Snails with their own severed appendages

1979537

"I expected her to butt fuck Snips and Snails with their own severed appendages."

Ew, gay. :trollestia:

Seriously though, that's a great idea! Why didn't I think of that?

I might have to include another chapter, if for no other reason than to cover Snips and Snails self-sodomy.

Dat description
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Oh wait, it's Bronystories....

That explains it.

Another disturbing fic, hopefully to soon be featured on the homepage. Wish ya luck.

1979419 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

1979541 I live to serve, and technically it's masturbation not gay. Self on self

I did just finish a 50,000 word exploration on the pleasures of sodomising another stallion, so I still have that on the brain.

This vaguely reminds me of a certain one-shot that I wrote.
A lot of differences, but I'd say the main one is the fact that I didn't do any characterization, resulting in the whole thing being kinda
crap. Also, a lot of people were butt-hurt that I totally screwed up on crossing-over a very well known character.

And while on the topic of character, Trixie seemed a little too evil in this, but that was kind of the whole point so, the characterization was
still really good. Hard judging what any of the mane six would do in Pinkie's situation so there can never be an exact answer for
what Pinkie's character would be like in that moment, but it was still good.

I usually avoid urine fetishes but other... things... in the description caught my interest, but I'm not going to bitch just because it
ain't my thing. I was actually expecting Trixie to go futanari in this, kind of expected she would want to completely dominate
Pinkie herself. Or did you just want to avoid turning the amulet into Trixie's magic bit?

Anyway... This was cool. Though I personally wouldn't consider this cloppable.
Hmm... Trying to decide if I want to fave...
It was interesting... So I will, a fave you shall get!

I have a fetish for this kinda stuff so I got a huge boner from this story

Damn, no idea where you come up with this stuff dude. It was honestly much more graphic than I expected, and I knew what to expect after reading your Aristocrats adaptation.

Favorited becuase of proof of consept and becuase you have already showe me you are a exelent author.

Well bronystories I generally dislike clop, due to shitty generic writing and the fact that ponies aren't sexy. however I make an exception in your case, you always write amazing and sadistic clopfics.

I do not think this deserves the feature box. :ajbemused:

This deserves all the feature boxes, you cretin.

Keep it up Stories. SOMEONE needs to be writing these things, and they might as well be good at it! You're the brony for the job. :trollestia:

1979371 maybe.. I dunno, write her something pleasant for once? would be nice

I kept giggling at the slang used for private areas. Because something like "gooey grotto" just sounded hilarious to me.
-ahem-
I digress, i don't usually cringe at mere words on a screen, but damn.
I have nothing to say but nothing at all.

1979863
We are just gonna have to disagree, then, because this one doesn't sit well with me. :ajbemused:

And if you think you're gonna call me some kind of prude, oh my the shock you'll have :applejackconfused:

I've enjoyed some of Bronystories's fics. Just not this- and you are NOT going to tell me I have to like it. :ajsleepy:

1979873 He gets antsy as hell whenever I tell him something like that.

1980067 well you can be kinky without resorting to rape for goodness sake. I would have dug this fic if Pinkie was being made to eat herself out. At least I could have been happy she was pleasuring herself. Or, I dunno, an orgy of mirror clone pinkies. hell, do it at fluttershy's critter picnic. Fluttershy can even be reluctant... just don't rape her.

1980064

I didn't say any of that. I just called you a cretin, you cretin. :trollestia:

But no, seriously. Like or dislike whatever you want. I don't give a flip. I want to see Stories push it to the limit, and walk the razor's edge.

"Her severed squish box jiggled like gelatin before being unceremoniously dropped inside the trash."

This.... this. This might be the funniest line I have ever read.

“Trixie is still going to beat you...”
Snips and Snails looked at each other nervously.
“...beat you off, that is.”

It's like a line from a bad porno.

Then again, I suppose it actually is a line from a bad porno.

"He closed his eyes as Trixie pushed the disembodied dick dugout further down his slippery shaft."

You make a lot of good use of alliteration in this god-awful fic.

"Snips’ gave a satisfied grunt as his stout sperm sprayer spread Pinkie’s submissive sphincter."

Seriously, as much as I want to hate this, I keep reading lines like this. Somehow, clever alliteration makes Pinkie Pie rape okay.

“Behold Trixie’s Great and Powerful Tinkle!”

This line doesn't need a comment.

Warning! Story contains non-consensual sex and some watersports.

No. Stop. No. No more of this shit. Pls.

Warning! Story contains non-consensual sex

:pinkiehappy::raritystarry::moustache:

and some watersports

:fluttercry::pinkiesick::applecry:

Sorry, but watersports isn't something I care for.

definitely deserves the Dark tag, just as you stated.

For those three, not even life imprisonment is good enough a punishment. There is one thing about being mad, but quite another to be vengeful for a bullshit reason.
and
And what worries me the most about this is that because of all this abuse and assault, Pinkie is gonna get emotionally scarred shitless from this, and possibly will not truly "wake up" from this nightmare.

For Trixie, Snails, and Snails, all of them should be banished to the sun...without any protection spells, and have any and EVERY piece of their existence completely wiped from all lexicon....

Yeah, I'm that pissed at what they did...:twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:.

There are..no..words.. :facehoof:

1980408
The tragic thing about Snips and Snails is that they didn't realize they were raping Pinkie. It's like if someone gave you a fleshlight, only to discover that the pussy you'd been pumping wasn't fake.

I imagine that Snips and Snails would feel terrible about what they did to Pinkie.

Why is this in the feature box with so many downvotes? :facehoof: Go home Featuring system, you are drunk.

1979873
1980067
I'm just as surprised as you that deplorable stories like this make it to the feature box.

It makes me think about how successful a more mainstream story could be. If this wasn't a rapefic with watersports, I imagine it would have a higher ratio of likes to dislikes.

It might interest you to know that I'm currently working on several non-mature, non-sexual stories. I'm taking great care with them and waiting to publish the stories until I have the idea completely written out.

1980542
The Feature system isn't drunk. :unsuresweetie:

I just slipped a roofie into its drink. :raritywink:

Back with a Bang(:raritywink:)

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That is all.

This made me lol more than feel aroused.:rainbowlaugh:

I... I don't know what to think about this.

1980083

"I want to see Stories push it to the limit, and walk the razor's edge."

I don't so much "walk the razor's edge" as "use the razor's edge as a springboard to swan dive into a pool of razors." :pinkiecrazy:

1979710
I can assure you there's more where that came from!

1980542

Mouthing Off:
55 likes
25 dislikes

I think it says something when you can still make the feature box with only thirty more likes than dislikes. :twilightblush:

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