It was no surprise that Andrew hated Rarity. He never hid his disgust towards her. One fateful day, he wakes up to discover that he has become Rarity.
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Mathew_The_Raridash_Fan
I love My Little Pony and Littlest Pet Shop. My favorite ponies are Rarity and Rainbow Dash. I love to write fanfiction, but I need to learn to pace better.
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Hm.. Okay, this story could have potential... It's just kinda blunt and shows little emotion. Here's some fixes-
I don't even know what you were trying to say here.
Possible edit:
The show would be better without her.
Are you saying girls aren't organized?
Possible edit:
The room was very feminine and organized
Grammar errors
Possible edit:
The bathroom isn't too difficult to find... Plus, there's a shower
Hope these pointers help!
*cringe*
Who are the three people who liked it? It's supposed to be all bad ratings! I even gave myself a bad rating!