'Curse you pigeons! I'll get you back for that!' I thought as the seventh bird today used me as a toilet.
I was currently in a crouched position, in my 'black spider suit' form. So, I don't look scary.
'Ugh, why me?' I mentally cry in my stone prison. I've been in here for god knows how long. My last host is dead, poor thing. And white stuff stuck to me. They didn't even clean me anymore! I thought being with these ponies was going to be cool.
Oh, right. My name is- Was, Lee White. I went to Comic Con dressed as Venom, met the Merchant from Resident Evil, and became the Simbiote I pretended to be. Before you ask how I got in here, let me tell you:
Not. My. Fault.
I just happened to be at the wrong place, at the wrong time.
Racist Ponies...
I heard the sound of clopping hooves that drew my attention, and six mares came into view. I mentally remember each one as I saw them. The first was a Pegasus that had a blue coat and a messy rainbow mane that seemed brash, the next was another Pegasus with a yellow coat and pink curly mane, she seemed shy, an all pink one that was hopping around happily, one with an orange coat, though her mane was had to see with the Stetson on her head, a white unicorn that had a purple mane, she looked like a snob.
But the pony that got a metaphorical smile on my face, was the all purple unicorn that had a baby dragon on her back. Twilight Sparkle.
"Why are we here again, Twilight?" The brash one asked. Which I dub Skittles!
"Yes, I thought we were hear to help with the Gala?" The snob questioned. Marshmallow!
Twilight turned to her friends.
"We came here so I could show you girls my favorite statue, 'Black Spider'"
Wow... just... wow... Celestia gave THAT much thought into naming me?
"Why's it you're favorite statue? Um, if you don't mind me asking..." The shy one whispered. From hence forth, thee ist Scared Cat... Though you probably know that already.
"Its okay Fluttershy,"Darn! "When I was a foal, I used to go to the gardens to read, I always came to this statue. I'd tell it about my day like it could hear me! I guess next to Shining and Spike, it was one of my only friend."
'Awww... I like you to Twi!'
"Really, Twah?" Said the orange one. Cow-Girl!
"Yeah! I spent half my time here. I had some fond moments with this statue..." Twilight began to daydream about some of the wacky stuff she did here. I loved having her here, but as she grew older, she started focusing more of her time studying, and less time hanging in the gardens. She hasn't visited me in over five years.
She sighed happily. Then the pink one, which I'll call Pinkie, spoke.
"Why's he so white?" 'Ouch.'
"Princess Celestia started losing support keeping the statues maintained ever since Discord broke free." Informed Twilight, giving me a sad look.
"If you'd ask me, they should all be destroyed!" Marshmallow remarked rudely.
"Why? If they ARE alive, then that would be like murder!" Pinkie said. Smart girl!
Marshmallow seemed to reeled back from that. Serves her right.
Twilight ignored her friends, and called for a couple guards to take me to the train station.
Once we got out of the passenger car, I was transported to a tree library. It didn't surprise me, considering there princess controls the sun.
They placed me to the side, so I wouldn't get in the way... So, next to the door...
When I was set up, Twilight began to clean me... Awkward.
But anyway! She and Spike -Who also used talked to me, but a lot less- started doing there own things, but Twilight always took small amounts of time to sit and read to me, or talk about what she's doing. I enjoyed every minuet of it. I've always been the guy thats easy to listen.
But all good things come to an end. As night fell.
'She'll be back. I have no doubt...' I thought, trying to comfort myself. I did have doubts, who wouldn't?
The night seemed to last an eternity, until I heard the sound of rattling at the door.
There was a final click, and the door opened, there stood three ponies. A yellow-green unicorn with a purple eyes, mane and tail. And two Earth Ponies, one brown, with a silver mane, blue eyes, and the other was silver, with a brown mane, and red eyes.
"We'll get what we need, and take care of anypony here." The unicorn stallion whispered in the dark to the two earth ponies. If I wasn't in stone I think I'd punch him, with what he said about Twilight, I was furious.
How dare they break into Twilights home.
How dare they try and steal her things.
How DARE they threaten an innocent pony and young Dragon.
*Crack*
'...What?'
*Crack* *Crack* *CRACK* *CRACK*
The intruders seem to have heard it to. They look all over the place, until there eyes rest on my freed form.
"Okay, two ways out. There's the easy way, you give up and turn yourselves into the authorities. Or, the hard way." For extra effect, I punch my firsts together. They don't seem too scared. The blue eyes pony rushed me with a knife...
He jumped on me... Only to be consumed by me.
First host in forever! I over powered him easy, and now I look pony.
I drop the knife. The other two seem worst for the wear. I wish I had a camera. I double web sling the two remaining baddies, and pull them over to me.
"Hard way it is." I said before my teeth popped out of the suit(You know, like the real Venom).
I rushed them.
{Twilight's POV}
I heard a ruckus downstairs and went to investigate...
Most interesting.
I'm keeping my eye on this one, its really good so far.
keep it up
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or venom will get you.
5875758 Oh, I plan to.
I better not miss a thing
5875835
Interesting story.
What.... what happened. First time I joined this site two years ago Venom was an after thought. Now he seems to be a hot topic.... AND I LOVE IT! Also.... You BETTER have Carnage in this.
Nice
Where did you get the did you get the idea to use Venom
5876109 Okay! I was thinking about that. Maybe Toxin too!
5876254 Venom is one of my all time fav villains, I could NOT resist. I thought Fluttershy would be a funny host, but I think we all know who Lee's gonna pick.
5876293 twilight is it
5876313 Yep. To obvious.
5876293 Rainbow as a Carnage host!
5876347 Ooooohhhhh! That fantastic!
(Lee/Venom: This is Marvel, not Doctor Who!)
5876355 CAN IT LEE! YOU MAY BE THE BEST SYMBIOTE EVER BUT YOU CAN'T DENY HOW BAD ASS RAINBOW IS!
Are you going to you the prefured speices name for venom sybiote or just call him symboite?
5876361 I don't think he can! Heh...
5876381 What?
5876389 Venom has a defined species name now. They're called the Klyntar... and ironically they're the equivalent of Space Cops.
Oh sorryi forget not everyone is a comic nerd. The spices of symboite that Venom, Carnage, Hybrid, Toxin and the like are part of a speices call the Klyntar,.but your questioning of my previos comment is enough of an answer that he will be referning to himself as a symboite.
5876394 yay a fellow hyper comic nerd!
Can you finish the story I want to see what happen next
5876394 Hmm... Okay, thank you.
5877530 I misspelled, fixed.
Hm... sounds like Lee really wants Twilight... but if he's anything like the real Venom symbiote, he's going to end up bonding to someone he doesn't want.
Cue Trixie.
5878446 Why do you say that?
5878652
Why won't Lee end up with Twilight? If Twilight is analogous to Peter Parker, then she'll reject Lee, and Lee will have to find someone else.
Why Trixie? Because Eddie Brock was to Peter Parker as Trixie was to Twilight. Plus Trixie would make a pretty badass Venom.
As far as Toxin, it would make more sense if that symbiote ended up going to an ally instead of a rival.
But I'm just speculating.
5878702 But she's been 'friends' with Lee since she went under Celestia's wing. And wouldn't she try to befriend him even is that was not the case? But yeah, it made sense to me to.
I guess Trixie would be alright, but with her I see him going down the path of evil.
Never know...
Grammar could use a bit of work (using there instead of their in a few instances), but all in all it's a good read.
For the first chapter i donĀ“t mind that it is a bit rushed, but it seems to be short as well.
To be honest i am just glad that i have to read a few more chapters right now, and i like it, it is just a bit short compared to what i am used to read.
Okay. It's not rush oddly enough. But details would be nice. Also only very few grammar problems. Otherwise good job.
You really need to work on your homophones. Learn the differences between two/to/too and there/their/they're, especially.
Also, spell check, please.
I assume that he became the symbiote right?
Then that would be big hole here, the symbiote cannot survive without a host unless our displaced became one with the symbiote so they share a combination of the bodies.
Anyways about psycological damage can be passe because for the the symbiote
6089341 ... but he had a the symbiote can survive for a short time to find a new host, plus when he was imprisond he had host... who was not turned to stone and died inside the statue