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The sequel has arrive so enjoy
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/260283/the-appearance-of-the-new
5898945 yeah well It's Dynol side of the story so he doesn't know that and 5 out of 1 yelling monster would drown out the 'wait lets talk about this"
This story has 92 likes and 23 dislikes... How the actual hell did it achieve that?! It looks like the story was written out, then fed through Google translator a few times before beaten with a stick.
6033101 Close enough
Hey why is everyone being mean the guy tries hard enogh fuck off
6123705 I have a supporter
I soooo happy
no prob ill support anyone
6123705 have ya ever heard of something called constructive criticism?
6033101 Exactly. It's like a half mental twelve year old wrote this.
6227946 33.media.tumblr.com/58e67a4eaac1232d655261c7cd073d46/tumblr_moghq8gFUY1re3x32o1_500.gif
The story is (somewhat) good, but the grammar is atrocious.
6718923 That is true, but it's hard to pull off on your fourth story.
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25 weeks , 5 days ago. Read.
Holy crabs, get a proofreader to look through this. I really hope English isn't your first language.
You know, having seen the sequel first, I would've thought this story be longer.
7331015 ...Is that good or bad?
I love your story because it's the back story to my character the master he was in Equestria he didn't know what happened before hand but he left tapes (Master Tapes) he goes a town near by and sees the world that he is in. A pony goes to him and runs away afraid,she goes the authorities but the pillars come when they see him starswril fires a magic blast at him but masked asked him to stop but when she looked into the masters eyes she saw darkness so starswril cast him out of town and then during the years every time pony saw him they were afraid of him. being alone for a long
time was driving him to become insane plus the fact that everyone was afraid of him it drove him mad and was corrupted with the soul of the shadow pony and Sombra. The master is a entity that can only get out of you if he chooses to call him like a infection the longer you lost control the more likely he'll take control of your body. He is Sombra and the shadow pony mixed togther in one entity. You can listen to his fall on the master tapes on my YouTube channel DoctorPony for the tapes anyway i thought about this before I made this account so nice job of making a kind like masters story
Doctor out
Just replace "Monster" with "Pansy" and then you have it right.
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Dude, they thought an equine was a monster/evil. What do you think a foreign body would look like to them, if not a monster?
Do you have an editor?