The Long Road Home

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To whom is reading this journal,
My name is Pinkamena Diane Pie. If you're reading this, Equestria has turned on the device, and I am stuck far away from home.

This story is cancelled due to lack of inspiration.

(I do not own the picture, but I do own the words on the picture! Hooray for MS Paint!) I also do not own Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood, Portal, or My Little Pony. Thanks!

Chapters (6)

Turning on the device · 13th Apr 2015 · 2,220 words
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We Have To Find Her! Twilight's perspective · 28th Apr 2015 · 1,412 words
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Uh, isn't the older brother supposed to be taller? (Pinkie's perspective) · 28th May 2015 · 1,511 words
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There is Dirt EVERYWHERE!! (Rarity's Point of View) · 14th Jul 2015 · 1,106 words
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...And to Give Them a Piece of My Mind. (Rainbow's Point of View) · 22nd Aug 2015 · 1,146 words
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I Believe in You. (Pinkie's perspective.) · 15th Sep 2015 · 1,612 words
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gamer4COD

gamer4COD #1 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · · Turning on the device ·

Interesting.

Comment posted by yourlocalhetheydisaster deleted Apr 16th, 2015

Crimson Dawn

Crimson Dawn #3 · Apr 28th, 2015 · · · Turning on the device ·

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Yea I don't think that joke has any legs.

Krozairofequestria

Krozairofequestria #4 · Jul 14th, 2015 · · · Turning on the device ·

Interesting start, even if I don't think you hit truth character very good.
Well let's se what will happen in the next chapter.

Krozairofequestria

Krozairofequestria #5 · Jul 14th, 2015 · · · We Have To Find Her! Twilight's perspective ·

Ok one of them is going missing, but they let the rest stay in a new world instead of sending everyone back. And then separate the heroes that can only really work in a team . This is even for Equestrian ponys a new level of stupidity.

Also, how many of them got through the portal? and this on one of the first tries? And now they just give up?
It is really fun to read. How much of this conflict could be avoided if they had a little bit of common sense XD.
Also on the legs? really?

this is so funny XD i like it.

yourlocalhetheydisaster

yourlocalhetheydisaster #6 · Jul 14th, 2015 · · · There is Dirt EVERYWHERE!! (Rarity's Point of View) ·

6205418 Thanks for the feed-back and compliments on my story! Now to shed some light on the leg thing. Placing a tracking device on the ponies hind legs was the only thing I could think of that could make Pinkie unable to be found, due to the fact that she lost them In the exchange with Truth. Anywhere else, and she would have been able to be found very easily, thus making the story end both quick and boring.

Thanks for the compliments and thoughts!
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