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Sweet Celestia, Twilight's got some serious self-esteem issues. She needs to work through those sometime.\
I'm eagerly awaiting more! And waiting for some actual clopping, rather than dirty-talk.
You're really going to make me ship Pinkie and Fluttershy in a BDSM relationship?
. . . well, if you insist!
You know for something that started with a typical clop plot, this takes up alot of serioues issues and emotions that I really love to explore!
Self doubt, sexual insecurity and even insecurity over sexuality. This is pretty damn good! Much Love!
I await the next chapter patiently
I hope you don't plan on Applejack admitting to being a fillyfooler to her family and they're all just fine with it. Real life just doesn't work that way.
Anywho this story is quite funny at times and the emotional issues here are quite interesting. I look forward to more of it but I think the title is a little deceptive. I know its to late to change it but this story taking on a few more serious issues then the title implies, also your not shipping every one together and some people might pick that up.
Dam Spike im sorry looks like you are not getting any Rarity love.
But I do want to see what happens to you.
Sweet baby Jesus, PinkieShy BDSM.
All of my gusta.
marvellous ha-ha the storyline is amassing 0.0
592924 Read on. As the story develops, the title may not be so misleading. Also, I like the simplicity of it and the alliteration.
Also, I am using the title as an attention-grabber of sorts. I realize my writing is a little deeper than "fooling."
Thanks for the feedback!
Why is it so easy for me to imagine Sweetie Belle saying penis?
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Heh. I hate figuring out names for my stories. I end up having half the story written and no clue what to call it so I make something up on the spot. Then a month after I've posted the story and I look back and say: Why did I do that?
Your welcome for the feedback by the way.
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593513 Yea coming up with a good title is a bitch.
592938 Keep the faith with me man don't count him out yet till its over!
593526 Sweetie Bell you sadistic little genius, you.
Spike is sarcastic, blunt, and caring not only have you mastered his character you also managed to show what good guy friends are really like. We might be a bit crude but we do care and were always there to help. I love how Spike pretty much embodies that behavior. He's also horny another great sentient trait!
You expanded the girls feelings and concerns wonderfully. They're at a awkward point full of self-doubt and you really play that over well. I'm glad I didn't let the tittle stop me from reading this (totally came for the Spike though) cause I would of missed something pretty damn epic.
594022 Guessing you a big time Spike fan too?
594069 Well I am one of the contributors for the Sparity group (in fact chances are if you get a notice about a new fic added that was me), have a comment on most of the Sparity fics as well as other Spike related fics, and have my own Sparity Fic on the site (I'll have two by the end of the night at this rate). So I'm going to go with yes.
594093 Just out of curistoy. why? Im a fan mostly because after all the shows and all the drawings and fanfiction he reminds me of me. And for personal reasons I just want to see the guy get Rarity and be happy even if it is a cartoon.
594218 Honestly I feel that he gets fucked over a lot just because he's a guy. I see how hard he tries to do anything he can for Rarity, a number of which are no small feat (greed growth, getting Hoity Toity to come to the fashion show, and giving her someone she can talk honestly to), and I can't help but root for the guy... the fact is he deserves a happy ending and the two of them really do seem to deserve each other. Now I will say that Fluttershy is closest to what I look for in women modest, shy, beautiful, kind, and graceful. But the fact of the matter is Spike and Rarity have something I feel could be really special and I am a cheesy hopeless romantic (I'm also a well trained and rather skilled fighter but ya no details). Sparity just hits all the right notes for me and I can't help but fall in love with the pair.
594271 Well its nice someone feels the same way. For me he just hits home tries to help and care for the mare he loves even if it hurts him. Really just hits home but hey you know "mares" these days. Well, nice talking to a Spike fan but I'm out for the night. Hope you update soon. It's always nice to read a good Spike, Rarity romanic.
Yeah I'm a chessy hopeless romantic too. Just seems better then the caual thing.
594314 Indeed, night
Well, this story turned into quite the interesting one. It's a lot deeper than most 'fics of the same kind' and certainly a lot better written. Even though it's probably too... vulgar for EQD, I still think it's really good and, in my opinion, close to that level.
Keep on writing
And there it came. The obligatory "Fluttershy likes it rough" plot. I ain't disappointed, it's just not really surprising and in this case actually a bit predictable. Anyhow, nice chapter as always, no gleaning here
I love the story~ so glad I took the chance to read it. I am eagerly awaiting more!
595835 We used to most commonly play "Kiss, Marry or Avoid" but there's all sorts of variants.
"gladly except other forms of payment" // except -> accept
Why is Sweetie Belle saying those horrible things? She's a grade schooler, and hearing that level of conversation (and yes, I hear it perfectly) makes me want to cry a little.
Poor Derpy, she's not even in this fic and she gets insulted. How could you not love this face?
598922 I am your Wiafu? Hooray! Here. have a muffin!
Spike, why are you do mean to me! I mean, I saw the faces of bronies watching The Last Roundup and they were DROOLING when they saw me! (The good kind of way, not the bad kind!) Some even called me "sexy"! And I don't even know what that means!
620644 Here, have a muffin!
I'm really enjoying the dialogue and character interactions. It's all really interesting stuff. Rarity's clop scene was disappointingly short and left me wanting, IYKWIM. But hopefully she gets some more action later in the story. Will continue tomorrow!
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Spike, like a sir.
“Have you been reading my dictionary again?” Twilight asked, sneering.
“Presumably,” Spike answered.
Twilight gets all the bitches.
Literally LoLed at that one.957047
593492 Dont we all and i can imagine more than that heh
-10 muffin points for saying Derpy is ugly
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"except" and "accept" are not the same thing
Another great chapter. Onward to the next segment!
Good story but in the last chapter and this one as well you made some minor errors. 1. its Granny smith 2. its saddle bags
The fuck did you say about The Derpy!
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calm your tits. look me straight in the eye and tell me that if your saw a absolutely gorgeous babe. smart independent funny, open minded ... but then had incredibly crossed eyes you would be a little bit... put out. and on top of that while derpy's character type is super adorable unless you want to look me in the camera and write me that you wanna put your dick in a small colorful horse your not that attracted to her.
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*looks you in the eye*
I want to stick my dick in a colourful pony with crossed eyes.
Nop, she would be a straight up dom
Wanna know why?
... The Stare
Hmm actually there's a schedule for the weather that's posted weekly... 2012 sure just nagging me a bit