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Mmm, 'tis be a nice chapter.
If I find that Rainbow and Pinkie rolled in the hay, I think that I would allow a little of Cupcakes just this one time...
"Fluttershy yay"
Love triangles...love triangles everywhere!
I detect Princest in the coming chapters
You cliffhanging sonofabitch....keep up the good work.
“Silly, I’d be doing all the baking. You’d just have to help me with the ingredients!”
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"Fluttershy regretted having lost touch with the woman..." ....... A WHAT now? I looked that strange word up in my pony-dictionary and couldn't find an entry even close to it. I have no idea what you meant.
"... track the woman down." Again with the strange word.
"...there was something touching about the way she had tried to teach her to masturbate..." That's just such a funny line!
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Oh, give me a break. I’m the ruler of Equestria. I’m allowed to think whatever I want. oh dear, molestia breaking through.
Cupcakes reference...Check
so funny.
No Dash, you're not allowed to screw this up. Applejack is a decent pony and she deserves to be treated with respect.
I mean, you even lied to her about 'loving' her and took her virginity.
This can only end badly
got ur cupcake reference! lol its amazing that four little words 'I think I'll pass' could be the differnce between life and death for RD
also spike, Why u no lik ruby? and bad rainbow bad! no cheating on good girl applejack! pinkie, ur no better! leading tha poor girl on like that (Even though your olivious to the situation) it looks like tha only good ones are and
everyone else...... BAD BAD BAD
i shall wait for more bad to ahppen. keep up the fine work
While not that subtle, it's still the most subtle Cupcakes reference I've seen.
Eager to see how the Lunestia situation develops.
rainbow dash better not screw up
and i see molestia coming through
i want more celestia and luna!
That will be amazing!!
Thanks for next chapter!!
Rarity's solo scene was a little better this time, though the anatomy of it was a bit... off. At least the duration lasted longer and we got to have a little more detail about what she was doing to herself.
Might want to work on run-on sentences. Someone once told me that two commas in one sentence are enough, and three is pushing it. Try to shorten your sentences if you can, don't make one sentence stretch on longer than two lines on a page. Use a semicolon if you need to combine sentences together; like so.
I think it's kind of sad that we couldn't have one tender PinkieDash moment without referencing... that. I know it was a joke, but it kind of killed the mood for me. Hopefully that'll be the last one and we can enjoy the two characters interacting with each other from here on out.
690888 Just Yes. But was it wrong that I saw one looking like molestia?
Im not gonna let you ruin this Dashie!
Also I detect some hot Princest incoming.
Take it away Tucker!
The only problem I see with PinkieDash is that Fluttershy would end up cheated on :(
RainbowSparkle would be better, because the only ponies getting cheated on are Applejack and Rarity, my least favorites of the mane 6. Also, princest can have my nope. All of it.
Come on Celestia think about it. You own everything and lift and sun. So you make the rules. Just deem incest moral and no harm done. haha And shame on Rainbow Dash for thinking like that. I feel so sorry for AJ.
I know yo might hate me for this but I hope the CMC will find out about Twilight and Rarity's relationship. Anyway I really liked Rarity's big dilemma she seems to be so desperate to keep their secret from Spike and Sweetie Belle too meanwhile she tries to keep her reputation and beeing happy with Twilight.
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I just realized I totally missed that reference. Wow-
I think this was a little faster than usual, but it's taking an interesting turn. I find myself more interested in TwiRarity and LunaCelestia in this particular story, though. Or actually, I wish I had more info on all of them; later in the story, will we see one chapter on each pairing?
Oh god, if the CMC's find out what's going on with any of the main 6... "Cutie Mark Crusaders Filly Foolers YAY!"
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I was surfing the comments to see if anyone else caught it as well. If no one had said anything, I would have left it alone. I actually froze for an entire minute, and then shook my head really hard so I could snap out of it and continue reading.
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Aww- References tend to snap me out of it, but luckily that particular fic is something I was able to 'get over' after a few days.
When writing (I really should upload and finish something-) I always avoid pop culture or fic referencing, can be a total mood killer.
When I read that part, all I could imagine was a very bored Rainbow Dash, handing out sugar and flour.
I do honestly hope we get some chapters going in on one pairing at a time, though. I would love that.
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It usually does not bother me, it didn't even bug me when I read it. I guess it just hits me the wrong way sometimes if I'm not expecting it. Kind of weird that way.
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Oh yeah, catches you off guard. I've gotten a few times were a sentence reminds me of something, a thought or issue I've been thinking of and I just space out. There was a fic I read where Rarity was struggling to pay her rent, and I spent most of the time thinking about whether or not she was the owner. Damn brains
I really enjoyed this story at the start but as it goes on it really starts to lose cohesion and sense of continuity with first chapters but never-the-less your efforts are appreciated. You may want to work on grammar and ponification, terms such as woman don't really apply here. That said understand what you are trying to do with the damaged backgrounds but I am not sure if it's quite sticking. It all seems a bit rushed they all go from hooking up to revealing massive amounts of personal trauma in just about the same time frame. The bedroom interactions, at least with Fluttershy and Pinkie, after their breakthroughs seem a bit forced. No pun intended. Also I don't know if anyone else was bothered but by this but why did Celestia call Luna's thoughts sinful? That implies a whole lot, perhaps wrong would of been a better choice of words as in a moral compass more so than the type of religious connotation the concept of sin brings. Anywho, cheers and I hope to see more of your fun side in future works.
As one who made the mistake... do not reference cupcakes, ever, just don't
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Rainbow better not cheat on AppleJack.... Or she would be dead to me.
The endings are the best, I have no idea why, they just are...
688720 true to that im just as mad as u are im mean really / when i say i love some one i dont take it back i broke up with my GF two weeks ago (Really sad i might add ) but i still tell her that i wont take back my love for her.... i hate it and dont none you care about me
Great Story (True Story)
Pony Log: Day 241
Sleep is becoming a rare occurrence these days. Hours pass by in a flurry of text and pictures, depicting many an act between two or more of this particular race.
A new edition to the Clopfic active gained my attention. 'Filly Fooling'. +100,000 words and almost 30 chapters long in its completion. It is at this point in the story where the grasp of the insomnia-inducing ponies has recessed, my ship-filled brain unable to comprehend any more words or lines after A reading streak of +4 hours on this single story.
I now leave in an attempt to gain rest, all whilst congratulating and cursing you, the author, in creating such a great piece of comical, emotional, and occasionally erotic fiction. If i had the energy to, I would gladly award you numerous mustaches, deciding whether (is that the right one?) i should hug or shoot you.
I eagerly await reading the rest of this, good job.
Please... no Cupcakes references...
A good chapter, none the less.
Uhh, RD i think you'll be good at making cupca... hang on, cupcakes? cupCAKES? no NO RUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
The cupcakes reference was pretty interesting. This is the sole story that I am reading this weekend. I am considering this to have been a wise selection.
I like the cupcakes reference. Very nice touch to the little pinkie dash moment you had going
You know, love is way less complicated than you make it seem
It's also not hard to bloom
Also more than friends is pretty high and there is nothing in between friendship love and actual romantic love. The question you are looking for is of both parties are willing to give it a try.
I can't stress enough, though this is the first time I'm saying this: you are treating this as a taboo and it might be a bit, but hiding feelings is, as you have put in this very fic, ultimately useless.
Back to the subject at hand, you don't need to be madly in love with someone to be, well, in love. It isn't a swear word.
Yes yes acknowledging your feelings is good don't stop
And it wasn't manure, it was true.
I wouldn't be phased if this story ended in an orgy
And we are back to the wincest sisters' after hours special! Starring: The Royal Sisters!
That's what I'm talking about! Seize that royal authority!
A few nobles with sticks up their asses is hardly what I would call dire