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The next chapter will consist of the letters Twilight and her friends send to Princess Celestia, and that is going to be the last chapter of this story. It's been an incredible six months creating this story. Thanks for all your support during this long process. I may come back with other stories, but probably not something of this length again.
Thank us? Thank us?
Thank you for wrapping up (most of) the drama in one fell swoop! This chapter has made me very happy. I admit, I'm kind of sad that you're ending it prior to Twilight's child being born. I'd been kinda hoping for a "Magical shit happened, it's actually Rarity's child." At any rate, this is good. This is great, in fact, this might be the best (not clop) chapter you have.
...and what about AJ's family? Please tell me she makes an effort to reconcile, or else something like she goes with Big Macintosh to confront Granny Smith about what she's done, and saying that if she wants to alienate her closest relatives over something so trivial, then she may as well kick all of them out and die alone, and then she decides to give AJ's relationship a trial run and tenuously accepts her back in.
Please?
Well, that wrapped up quickly.
The battle was disappointing.
Wow. That was... extremely rushed. I hope all the loose ends get tied up in the letters. And I hope they mention AJ/RD working through the problem with pinkie's kiss, because AJ doesn't deserve to be left hanging the was she was.
Ok, that was rushed. Also Luna is a lying backstabber.![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
I think you should stick it out for a sort of epilogue. After the end go like 5 or 10 years into the future and show where every pony ended up. I guess I'm just saying to do that because I don't want to see this story end, I've been following since chapter 1.
Win battles in ten seconds flat.
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Finally less stuff to keep track of. :D
sucks that such a wonderful story is coming to an end. but still, i can't wait to see how it all wraps up.
Wow...It's been one hell of a ride, and I'm glad this wrapped up before the quality began to sink too deep. Still, happy to have stuck it out, instead of abandoning ship.
Ah, this journey is coming to a close. Nice to see you wrap many of these mini-plots up (but what about Ruby and Spike?).![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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I agree going ahead 10 years to show the results of everything would be a good way to close up.
Le awesomeness cannot be compared! And I say, if the mood takes you, why not write for this length again? T'would be a pleasure reading it, I'm sure.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Must say that was without doubt one of the crappiest wrap-ups I've ever seen, especially since the ardor was about as lifeless as the Sahara desert. This story has turned out to be a disappointment after such a great start and it actually hurts seeing it end like this. Seeing so many major events go off one after another written like some kind of script didn't satisfy me at all. Hope the last chapter you talked about can shed some light of consolation on this entire story, at least...
noo you cant end it no![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
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and yea it was rushed I mean imagine Chrysalis as Pinkie and all the fun sex things there :-)
A little rushed, but it's better than having deception drag on for several chapters. I approve![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I have to throw my lot with those who say that this chapter was way too rushed. It's a shame you cannot remove a thumbs up after giving it, because I don't feel this story deserves it after this latest chapter.
A little rushed but not bad. Happy to see all the loose ends wrapping up.
Um... I'm sorry, say WHAT?![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
So, Applejack flies off the handle when she hears that Rainbow and Pinkie kissed at SOMEpoint, but doesnt know when-- yet Rarity raping Spike is just peaches and cream with her?! DA FUQ?!
Next, she had heard that her brother was sleeping with her friend WITHOUT telling her, and doesn't proceed to call the hyppocritical pansy-assed, lilly-livered, yellow, pot-bellied son of a bitch out?
Also, did Ruby just disappear off the face of the earth? Along with the all-too deserved noose for that psychopath of a Psychiatrist?
Applejack still hasn't confronted her family again and Twilight hasn't had her kid yet. Sequel, please?![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
Felt way too rushed after the reactions on the previous chapter. Not to be rude but 'very disappointed' is exactly how i feel.
I will never forget this Fanfic and will always recommend it first to everypony i meet. Cooopercrisp...I hope you make more stories for my heart could not bear you leaving the place in my heart you have made. Best fanfic ever!!!
I kept reading the story and I didn't realize it but now I can see there was something wrong with it... because while it does feel rushed, it is also still better than if you had kept upping the drama.
I am disappoint.
I should've stopped reading when I had positive feelings towards this fic. This chapter was painfully rushed, all the dialogue was hideously awkward, and you have pretty much failed as an author on this one.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
1481854 Disappointing, I've really enjoyed this.![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
i am dissapointed. not that the fic wasnt good or anything, but i expected beautiful romance between the mane 6. I am thoroughly dissapointed.
That final little battle scene could have been a little bit more drawn out. *Sigh* Now, on to the final chapter...
Everyone reacting to Twilight's revelation was funny. Everything else about the chapter was....rushed at best![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
Ha! Wit until it comes out
Well that was a genuine twist nobody was expecting because it wasn't blatantly obvious.
What did I just say? "Woooow, what a twist I never saw it coming" -said no one
Sex, Dash
The only therapist in town... And you don't know who? What the hay?
Have you considered that he might like it?
Uuuggghhhhh facepalms
This so felt like a round Trip episode
APPLEJACK GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS
GODDAMNIT MARE WHAT THE FUCK
angry animal noises
Like that's gonna happen with the actual bearers of the elements around
You would know
Seriously how worse can this get?
Sounds like the beginning of a bad joke
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Oooh but they are not all there are they?
You, Your Highness, have a dark sense of humor
Funny. I find it very likely
Twice now you've used very long range teleporting as if it was nothing. I mean, even if they are Alicorns it should have drained them.