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588331 Thought so. No EqD for me then!
It's cool though. I will probably write something else more EqD appropriate in the future...
Not before I finish this, though!
FIRST! (technically if you ignore the author) (and EPIC STORY SO FAR. I'd fuck, buck, and marry everyone at the same time.)
I love bi-Dash, I love implied AppleDash, and I'm totally down with potential BDSM. Sign me up for more!
I love it when stories actually feature ponies wrestling with their sexuality rather than always knowing what they want in another pony. It's a fun angle to play around with.
This chapter it pleases me... to an extent.
Its nice to see Spike seems to be getting some screen time. I love how he outsmarted Twilight to find out she did something dirty and also his bluntness about the whole matter just hilarious. You have reaffirmed my belief this might have legitimate Sparity, which would just make me ! And good Luna Twilight i can't decide if that's a cock tease or just pure kindness to the poor blue balled drake.
Appledash is always fun so's Flutterdash to be fair. Your at least implying their not all gonna be lesbians that drives me nuts a little when people do that; I mean what are the odds that all 6 of um swing that way?
So yea instead of writing my own fics I got distracted and read yours. (Thank you I needed a break )
P.S. Anyone else think looks like she getting ready to deep throat!
588427 you realize that knighty posted about banning people who first things, right?
588135 That's about what I figured. Thanks for clearing that up. I never had a problem with it really, just thought it should be pointed out.
Good story bro.......what was I saying oh ya MOAR
Good story, I want more please.
I love this fic, it's got a sort of show writing vibe that is usually destroyed by the clop content. Not here at all though, feels like a natural expansion on the characters, up to a more teen drama level. Waiting for more with bated breathe!
Huh...the whole 'f@#!, buck and marry' thing was an interesting concept. For me? Hmm...Pinkie Pie, Applejack and Fluttershy respectively.
This story is written well for a clop fic. It also has buildup. Can't say I saw that coming from this genre.
An upvote and a favourite for you!
Sincerely,
ChrisTheCat
Hello! I made this account so I could say how awesome the series is going so far.
It's difficult to find any romance/sexual stories on the internet that have any real depth and emotion thrown in, without being over the top or desperate. This story so far is a great exception; I suppose it helps being already accustomed to the characters and having them be likeable from the start. I don't quite know where you're taking it, but the excitement and tension that's surrounding the characters is keeping me very interested. I hope the following chapters are as natural and elegantly paced as these three. I don't care how long it takes but they simply MUST reach some sort of climax. Was that an innuendo? dunno mate
Anyway, I'll be keeping my eye on this story. It's so good!
Hiya! It's me, the guy who posted a review for ya back at Explicit Pony Fiction Archive. Just decided to follow this fine story, and you already probably know what I thought of your story. I'll post a comment every now and then here, hoping to please you with my opinions starting next update good working, man!
590981 If that doesn't work, try uploading money.jpg
after about 20 seconds of thought, here is my comment: after seeing a lot of HiE (human in Equestria) self-insert stories, I think if i ever write one it will be comedic, set after the ponies know me, and basically this and the past chapters happen and everything is extremely awkward. Because awkward is funny as hell for me and I know if I tried to ship myself with Rainbow Dash (maybe sterotyped but who cares, its who i'd go for if i got the chance), it would basically be horribly written cliches and possibly sex. Or i write the shipping and sex and shit but never publish it and enjoy others' work. ... Yeah, let's go with that.
BUT ANYWAY: awesome fic, it isn' t just straight into "and then they FUCKED!", and it is well written and also hilarious.
also random opinions: hypothetical-but-gonna-work AppleDash - meh, I prefer TwiDash (imo, adorable as FUCK) RariJack - sure, why not, my 2 least favorite ponies can get kinky. I won't pay attention, but they can
honestly, at this point i'm kinda hoping for a nice, friendly slumber party more or less like the last one, but with an orgy to boot. Who's with me?!?! Ok maybe just me. Oh well, write on you amazing writer you! Now seriously, back to writing your concentrated amazingness in a can, why are you still reading this long-ass comment? I want more. MORE. MORE!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7aBAy9cOdKM
MMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!
please?
Rainbow Dash's house is in Ponyville. Cloudsdale is a different place entirely. :|
/reads clop
//critiques canon violations
winston churchoof and joeseph stallion....winston church.....I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR
I think I might be sexually repressed twilight!
That part made me lol so freaking hard
Winston Churchoof and Joseph Stallion
I think i love you
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AppleJack has a choice to make, it would seem. Rainbow, or Rarity? Either way, I would be happy, since I'm a fan of both of those couples.
588527 dude no Apple/Dash is not the way im all bout' Rarity/Jack
Lol Winston churchhoof
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Are we going to ignore "Joseph Stallion"?
Grannie Gay-basher, lel
Adolf Hoofler is cooler than Joseph Stallion
Twilight saves the day by giving Spike ideas...great job! Still lovin' the story!