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Thanks to your incredible support, this story has just topped 100,000 words.
Thank you for all the feedback and constructive criticism. I maintain that the story will be finished in 30 chapters or less, so the plot's going to start moving very quickly, you'll see.
Oh goodness. Hopefully they forgive eachother.
Rarity, what size would you like your coffin? Puddle, pile, headless, or pancake?
shit meet fan.... fan meet shit
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In the words of my White Dwarves from FiE. "You gonna die!"
Hmm, I remember this being much less dark before the hiatus. I may have been confused with Four of Two.
Oh my, I can't wait to see what's Rarity in for next, plus why was Big Mac there also?
So much rape where am I prison?
Everyone loves one another.
This is, by far, the best chapter in the whole series. The storytelling, dialogue, all of it is SPOT on. And the FEELS! Man the feels. I know better than to expect Twilight to do more than verbally crush Rarity, or maybe slap her face but I know she'll end up being dignified.
And then everything blows up in a beautiful cascade of feels and drama.
Then ChrysCord appears and there is a massive orgy after which everypony forgets their small problems and comes clean. And have sex ever after. And stuff.
Ruby is an overly attached girlfriend.
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Ohh lordy. this'll be interesting to say the least.
MARE FIGHT This is the part were Big Mac and Spike sit back with a bucket of popcorn and watch
In retrospect, once this is all past, Spike will realize he should have opened Celestia's letter, thereby finding out Discord was on the loose again, before revealing something that's probably not going to help the efficacy of the Elements of Harmony. Not that it didn't need to be revealed at some point, of course, but...yeah, timing could have been a little bit better.
I'm almost dissappointed, though. I didn't imagine "talking" would be high on Twilight's to-do list when she found out. I figured "Drop boulders on boutique until boulder supply is exhausted" would be step one in the plan, followed by the judicious application of fire to the Boutique-Boulder mixture.
Suddenly, I'm getting a picture of there not being enough of Rarity left to fit in a match box after this 'talk.'
1246268 Welcome to the internet...
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Oh shit.
Mares and gentlecolts..... let's get ready to rummbleeeeee!!!
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I love the story so much I dont even read this for the clop
Now we gotta wait for the next chapterrrrrrr.. *whines*
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That is all.
Best story I have ever read.
and in a couple days its only gonna get better.
Oh my god
Well as I have told you before, you blow my mind every time you publish another chapter. I want a sitcom based off of this !!!
1260930 I didn't even think of that! LOL! Awesome use of Emotocon ponies!!!
Wooho the brutally truth comes out from the shadow. You might hate me for this comment but I really hope Twilight is alredy pregnant from Big Mac just they don't know yet. It would be funny to see Twilight stats to freaking out about she's not redy to be a mother just yet and what would everybody (especially Celestia) think of her being pregnant while she's not married yet also she has a serious crash on both Rarity and Big Mac in the same time.
I sense an arguement... and a fight... And chicken! w00t! dinners ready. i hope this story gets another update soon
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Poor Sweetie Belle might wake up for a noise of almost broken door and Twilight's yelling at her big sister and using odd and dirty worlds and when she comes out of her room to see what's going on she would see a furyous Twilight (maybe with burning mane and tail) Spike and Big Mac.
Poor Sweety won't have a good sleep on that night.
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1266580 Those pancakes look SO delicious...
EVERY. GOD-DAMN. CHAPTER.
Grarraaggaragaraagaaghghhg, so many bucking plot twists. WHATS NEXT? A METEORITE FILLED WITH FOALS...WHO FALL IN LOVE...WITH THEMSELVES??? /rant
But seriously, you have so many plot twists, it's bloody ridiculous. (My Little Pony: Plot Twists are Magic)
I hope Rarity gets what's coming for her. She committed something serious and she has to pay dearly.
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1278063 I'm not saying it's confusing, I'm saying it's retarded. This is a [Romance], why do we need Adventure-type villains being massively OOC in played-out ways?
now come on Twilight its not THAT bad
I half expected Spike to freak out and set the boutique on fire.
Actually it may be worse now. Did Twilight take Mac as a witness or as someone who can stop her if she goes out of control? I have seen other fanfics where she did that and the effects were never pretty.
Holy Moly, stuff happens!
i am still kinda disappointed in you cooper that u thought it ok for a twi/mac really cant u see we all love the lesbians?
Houston, Shit.Has.Hit.The.Fan! That was a pretty enlightening chapter for Spike. I look forward to finishing up reading this story tomorrow.
I really, really was enjoying this story, and still am, but I almost feel that it has gone from a story about the hardships of discovering ones own sexuality and friendships possibly becoming more, into something much sadder, and admittedly, a bit darker. It's almost as if it started as a romantic comedy and has now become Ponyville soap opera. Again, I still enjoy it, but it seems to be getting much more different than advertised.
... He is a dragon? You'd expect the scales to protect him from that