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RarityEQM
Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem
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I've been waiting for someone to create non-boob-related female milking story. Got any ideas for where that fluid is going and what it's going to be used for in later chapters?
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Actually I do, I do indeed!
All I read was the title and short description, and I'm already like:
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I'm just gonna upvote for this and then
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... oh, you know I'm just screwing with you; of course I'm going to read it, -.-
... What the...
I can imagine her building her own machine after that ordeal.
I was thinking;
And then at the end;
And I kind of went "Oh, jeez, it loops."
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I'm thinking maybe it's the naughty version of learning someone's "true name" or something in other tales. Maybe it'll be infused into a voodoo doll or otherwise used to compel poor twilight!
Or maybe it's just being sold to perverted rich old bastards like Filthy Rich?
Or maybe exotic cosmetics! Cosmetics has all sorts of gross stuff in it. Did you know that there is foreskin in real cosmetics? Can't make this stuff up, man.
Or maybe she's actually inside of a tinted glass theater, and there's a hundred customers leering at her, perhaps doing what they please with themselves! And one lucky winner gets to take home what the machine collects.
Or maybe she's been stolen by humans, and it turns out certain magical pony secretions can make potent medicines, and in the end, Twilight chooses to remain in the machine, rather than let all the people die without access to her sexy sexy medicine.
Or maybe she's in some kind of coma, and none of it is actually happening to her! And she'll have to struggle up through her own subconscious, and it's all some sort of unconscious metaphor for some kind of trauma that happened to her when she was a foal or some other super-deep nonsense like that!
I think too much.
This... is refreshingly different from normal clop stories. Me gusta.
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I was hoping more along the lines of... ahem, drinking it.
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Oh! Well I suppose that works too.
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I know. I'm dirtier than a used shovel.
Blck-Dynomite ain't gonna lie, this was definitely a different take on the concept. Well done, Blck-Dynomite will have to add this to his repertoire. You are an Innovator.
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5710715 Thank you for gracing this story with you presence, oh glorious Black-Dynomite.
Well I hope you get well soon
My Luna sense is tingling. I sense a devious plot twist ahead.
Celestia dammit, wo/man! It's just enough to get me up, but nowhere near long enough to get me off, you filthy tease!
Have my yes.
Raises more questions, answers almost none.
Moar.
What the hell!? Suddenly mystery to go with the clop? Unacceptable, this greatly exceeds the awesomeness quota for the story.
I bet the Gilda thing was just a dream/red herring.
This is pretty great! I love an actual story to go with the 'plot'.
So far so good. Great work!
Keep the new chapters coming in!
maybe the milk is used in fast food I mean something has to make the hay burgers taste good.
they could call it sparkle sauce.
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Please learn the difference between its and it's. Seriously, I counted more than five errors just from that alone.
On top of that, about halfway down, you used a period instead of a comma, and in another instance, you wrote her instead of here.
5717110 Oh, darling, are you offering to be my editor? I'd greatly appreciate it!
Was there a 4th chapter up briefly?
5717937 There waaaas- not now...
Your grammar is pretty good, I would say. I'd noticed the gas putting her out previously, but didn't really think of it as a way to grab her; she was asleep anyway so plenty of options to get at her. Whoever it is can reach Dash's cloudhouse, assuming she's involved.
I liked that Dash was able to stop herself. Very in character for her to overcome personal desires, even drug induced ones, because a friend needed her.
Wonder what happens now, though. They're on to the kidnappers methods, though the motives are still unclear. Is Gilda involved or was that a drug induced delusion?
I really hope this ends well for twi, I don't like seeing good ponies reduced to nothing more than a sex toy.
I think it is very likely that the other girls are "milked" too... but for what reason?
Is it a trial to test their spirit and psychological resistance? Does their stuff have magical properties because of their close bond with the Elements? Can it be used to brew some kind of potion of ultimate power? Or are their captors simply unredeemable perverts with strange desires?
So many questions
One question I do have is if they are using gas on Twilight then why isn't Spike affected? If there is an aphrodisiac than he's going to inhale some of it but he seems normal.
Memories have a way of sticking around a lot longer...
5722400 Ya know, that's a good question, Flea. That's weird, isn't it?
5722613 Why do I get the feeling that the plot twist is Twilight and Dash are just really horny and in heat?
I have to say you are doing a good job at keeping me guessing. Is it a dream? Is it a villain? Is it even actually happening? Who's in on it? Is Spike since he apparently hasn't noticed ponies breaking in, kidnapping and returning Twilight? Why is Dash's one different? What are they collecting her cum for? How does it taste? Why would they return her?
Right now my best guess is that its not for profit, if it were then they would have kept her to make more 'product' or moved onto a different mare after Twilight. If it is a conspiracy than it's to break Twilight.
Dash's part only makes me more curious, if they would go to great lengths to make sure Twilight doesn't know who then why would Gilda approach Dash on purpose and break it for no reason? Even if she did just want a personal session than they most likely would have used a blindfold, ear plugs and kept her restrained. As well as why would they just let her go take a shower unrestrained and why Dash does nothing to try and escape? It points to either the dream scenario or I think Dash might be part of it. If it even is Dash.
The only thing I know for certain is that Twilight is definitely building her own machine after all of this is done.
That being said I will be very annoyed if you just cancelled it without giving any answers. Keep up the great work!
God damn it man....
I started reading for the clop but the plot drew me in and i just can't quit
At this point I'm wondering who it could be behind all of this. If its not a dream and they actually move them each night than they have access to a large lab, custom built sex machines, knowledge of sleeping and aphrodisiac gas, magic. If its a new character(s) than all bets are off but if its not then all signs point... to Twilight...
I also want to ask, about how many more chapters are there?
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Oh, this is wrapping up rather shortly...
I found a typo.
That "me" should be a "he".
I found a punctuation mistake.
There should be a space between "was." and "Of".
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That problem is easy to fix. we just need to exchange the comic Spike reads with a porn magazine
NightmareShredder
Looks like the flim and flam brothers have set themselves up a nice and quite lucrative business!
I'm not here for the *cough, intimate parts. I like the general story though. And yes, this scene was a bit empty. Also, my prediction is, it's either Trixie or Celestia.
If the other mane 6 are being experimented on as well I wonder what their dreams would be about. What would yours be about?
Pshhh... not futa... what a crock
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Hey, at least this one gets consistent updates.
It was a tad empty, but what did happen was important. Not a huge deal, though if you want to go back then try to rewrite and have it combined into next chapter, if possible.
maybe you should ass a RD tag
our target? Is this a mistake or is this Twi mimicking the kidnappers?