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Have my yes.
Raises more questions, answers almost none.
Moar.
What the hell!? Suddenly mystery to go with the clop? Unacceptable, this greatly exceeds the awesomeness quota for the story.
I bet the Gilda thing was just a dream/red herring.
This is pretty great! I love an actual story to go with the 'plot'.
So far so good. Great work!
Keep the new chapters coming in!
maybe the milk is used in fast food I mean something has to make the hay burgers taste good.
they could call it sparkle sauce.
5716491
Was there a 4th chapter up briefly?
5717937 There waaaas- not now...
...
DAMN.
All my yes.
*Too many coincidences
Ahh, so that's why I saw quite a few... This was unedited. So here you go:
That's.
What's.
Nopony, one word in this case.
Too.
Just shift your closing quotation mark.
Personal preference but it's: Can I. Might be due to Rainbow's speech but hey, this one is up to you.
Too.
Extra spacing.
Forgot your spacing.
What's.
Forgot your spacing.
What's.
Extra spacing at the end.
Shift your closing quotation mark again.
Best use a dash. Though you used a dash at some later instances.
Shift your closing quotation mark again.
It's.
Replace your comma with a dash.
Shift your closing quotation mark.
Forgot your spacing at the end.
Personal preference, but this should be capitalised.
Heh, time to lose your pride, SparkleSlut.
Humnnnnn.....Maybe The Princeses are behing these kidnapings?
Twi, canni ask you a favor?
Did you mean to miss spell that?
I can't move or get her to stop.
The more I get the more motivation I have to pump out another chapter asap! ...Does anyone else feel like that?
No, I wish I would get motivation to write.