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Your grammar is pretty good, I would say. I'd noticed the gas putting her out previously, but didn't really think of it as a way to grab her; she was asleep anyway so plenty of options to get at her. Whoever it is can reach Dash's cloudhouse, assuming she's involved.
I liked that Dash was able to stop herself. Very in character for her to overcome personal desires, even drug induced ones, because a friend needed her.
Wonder what happens now, though. They're on to the kidnappers methods, though the motives are still unclear. Is Gilda involved or was that a drug induced delusion?
I really hope this ends well for twi, I don't like seeing good ponies reduced to nothing more than a sex toy.
I think it is very likely that the other girls are "milked" too... but for what reason?
Is it a trial to test their spirit and psychological resistance? Does their stuff have magical properties because of their close bond with the Elements? Can it be used to brew some kind of potion of ultimate power? Or are their captors simply unredeemable perverts with strange desires?
So many questions
One question I do have is if they are using gas on Twilight then why isn't Spike affected? If there is an aphrodisiac than he's going to inhale some of it but he seems normal.
Memories have a way of sticking around a lot longer...
5722400 Ya know, that's a good question, Flea. That's weird, isn't it?
5722613 Why do I get the feeling that the plot twist is Twilight and Dash are just really horny and in heat?
I have to say you are doing a good job at keeping me guessing. Is it a dream? Is it a villain? Is it even actually happening? Who's in on it? Is Spike since he apparently hasn't noticed ponies breaking in, kidnapping and returning Twilight? Why is Dash's one different? What are they collecting her cum for? How does it taste? Why would they return her?
Right now my best guess is that its not for profit, if it were then they would have kept her to make more 'product' or moved onto a different mare after Twilight. If it is a conspiracy than it's to break Twilight.
Dash's part only makes me more curious, if they would go to great lengths to make sure Twilight doesn't know who then why would Gilda approach Dash on purpose and break it for no reason? Even if she did just want a personal session than they most likely would have used a blindfold, ear plugs and kept her restrained. As well as why would they just let her go take a shower unrestrained and why Dash does nothing to try and escape? It points to either the dream scenario or I think Dash might be part of it. If it even is Dash.
The only thing I know for certain is that Twilight is definitely building her own machine after all of this is done.
That being said I will be very annoyed if you just cancelled it without giving any answers. Keep up the great work!
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That problem is easy to fix. we just need to exchange the comic Spike reads with a porn magazine
NightmareShredder
Hmmm? I have a niggling suspicion, but I'm going to play it close to my chest.
Had to admit, I was cautious of this at first, but with this chapter you've won me over. I can't wait to get to the bottom of who's forcing the dirty deed on these mares.
From Twilight vantage
I'd still feel safer with you. "Twilight purred
It's sleep, thats the only consistent
1. Twilight's.
2. Just shift your closing quotation mark.
3. That's.
I like that..."You said stop all that matters"
I love how you keep Rainbow dash as the element of loyalty even in lust.
I think it would be safer. For us, I mean. To sleep together. Err, over.
Prance
Oh for crying out loud
A lightbulb had gone off
0:01
and then turned and looked at Rainbow Dash
I thought Spike was going to get horny with that gas since he was still in the library.
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Dash too...