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RarityEQM
Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem
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Welp, here we go again...
Why are the ratings broken?
6254563 Broken Ratings?
6254570 Oh, weird. They were grey'd out and I couldn't click them like 5 minutes ago.
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Read the site blog posts, silly.
6254499 Indeed and tis a ride we shall enjoy.
Woo, sequel. And straight into the chambers again, awesome.
You snagged it from my story, Mount Me. I had to crop this picture myself because no other picture fit what I needed.
Wooohooo! Right on my track-shelf ;)
The Prequel to this was one of the rare clop-fics (erm... machine-fetish... you know what I mean) which actually made it on my fav-shelf.
So - dear author - bring it on
it's decent for now 6/10
Small typo:
its
Everything is in italics, it appears.
6276277 fixed
I'm fairly sure Twilight just completely hallucinated last night. Even if they needed her juices for some ritual, they would lay low after getting found in the Everfree, regroup and reconcile until they could go after her again.
Good job RarityEQM as always
It's actually Cadance. She figured her sister-in-law is waaaay too repressed and has been arranging all these "nights out" for Twi and friends with Chrysalis' help, to get her to loosen up (lol double meaning!).
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Hmm. This one is almost as good as Rarity's own 'Scootaloo'-revelation.
Oh now you notice something is wrong, nice one Cadence.
6276310 I would tend to agree, except that if it were a dream or hallucination, wouldn't Luna put a stop to it?
6280305 unless Luna tried to stop it, but Twilight believed it was real so hard, Luna couldn't do anything. I forgot, was Luna used in the previous story? I know Zecora was, but I don't know if Luna actually knows about what has happened.
6280367 If I remember right, Luna was the main source of exposition near the end of the last story. Also, I think Luna could overpower any dream if she wanted to.
I like this Twilight. She'll be a good lil slut
So naughty. I'm loving it.
Twilight you are such a delightful little treasure.
I love this twilight <3
Sad this isn't continuing at the pace of the original; it had felt like there was much more to explore with the secret plot.
6906881 I'm working on iiiiiiit! XD
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Didn't mean to complain or pressure you. I had kind of figured you'd moved on to other stories. Glad to hear it's not dead.
Odd...it's on the 'just updated' part of the website, but I see nothing....o.O;;;
7271514 i just got a notification about an update as well. 889 word long
Whyyy?!
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What, update!? It didn't even appear on my list for story updates. I'm glad this is continuing.
Did Twilight forget that Cadance put her to sleep, or does she just consider that normal?
Cadence was just trying to help, I'm sure. :3
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Definitely. There is no reason to question her motives whatsoever.
finely no clop and we get to the real meat of the story. looking good.
Crossed off names... Replaced guards?
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I am thinking the same thing Replaced guards but with whom and way?
hum this is getting interesting.
Yep, this aint gonna go well for those guards, and possibly Luna. Eight guards demanding the Twilight from Cadence and Shining Armor, and they both know Twilight went to them for sanctuary, Cadence knowing alot more on they why then Shining.
I look forward to more, and to seeing what the heck is going on. Though I would be remiss in not saying how much I enjoyed the machine play in this series, and will look forward to its return, if it does.
7279594 next chapter darling. ;)
I hope the next chapter as some ass kicking awesomeness.
I didn't get notified that this updated. Or was that intentional?
I also did not get a notification that this story updated. Could you post a notice in a blog about it? So Luna is the villain, I hope this is just a rouse because Luna is not fun when she is evil.
What could have been, what could have been. Sad to see the story end, but there was nothing I could do.
vary sad to this story end and the lay out looks vary interesting.
Pretty convoluted!
Thanks for giving this story at least some kind of closure! There are so many stories im following where the authors have just diasappeard, leaving their stories hanging with no conclusion whatsoever. I wish more people had the backbone to officially cancel thier stories and giving a brief summary of what could've been, like you did.
Wow...! So many twists and turns. It would have been a very great read, I believe.I was enjoying this story a great deal. Thank you for sharing the details and your ideas for this story. I wish more authors would do this when stories are canceled. You know I look forward to all your musings!<3
Posting my vote to post the unpublished chapter about Applebloom!
Please do share this additional chapter. And thank you for sharing this great story with all of us!
Man this sounds awesome wish this could have been written :( At least what was written is still great!