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VitalSpark
Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.
VitalSpark
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Interesting so far. Eager for the rest!
Great story so far. Daily updates you say? Brilliant!
'Not telling'? You're a twisted individual. I love it!
5931371 There's really not anything too heavily fetishy to warn about in this story. (Other than pony sex which is I suppose quite heavily fetishy to begin with.)
5930364 Yep, I'm a slow writer, but for this story I wrote the whole thing in advance before publishing the first chapter. The rest are just sitting there waiting to be published. You could read them right now if I were less cruel.
Clop wasn't exactly fap material, but I'll fav it just because I like the concept of the story and I want to see where it goes
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You're too sweet VitalSpark.
Now I have to write you a story for your birthday too
Well, Vinyl seems to be on the mend. Somewhat. More forward than backward, certainly. We'll see if she keep up the momentum.
I have to side with her rather than Beauty Brass. Sure, the response could've been more tactful, but Vinyl has a right to defend herself and her profession.
Oooh, now I want to know how Twilight is going to pay Vinyl, without using money.
I find Octavia's behaviour in the beginning to be rather rude.
Vinyl's crying from the nightmare, and all she does is wipe away the tear then have a shower. Why? They should have shared an emotional moment, but instead it was all; 'Let me just wipe your tear then go have a shower.'
The chapter itself was... OK. Nothing special by a long shot. Fast paced, too many scene breaks to get any enjoyment out of it. Dialogue was rather choppy. This is a good concept, but overall, poorly executed.
Sorry man gonna have to unfav this one, I came here thinking this was going to be a good story, but has failed to entertain me. You can keep the upvote though.
5937787 Chapter 3 is up, so you can find out now. It might not be what you expected.
Well, that's certainly a novel form of payment. Nothing says "I love you" quite like catering to a fetish that requires drastic body modification.
Wings are awesome. Now I just have to wait.
That last line was far too adorable. You should be ashamed of yourself.
5943980 Well, it had to all be building up to something, didn't it?
Soooooooo Sweeeeeeeeet!
That last line was fucking beautiful.
5947225 Thanks. Vinyl's explanation of the difference between an alicorn and a winged unicorn was originally going to be in chapter 3, but once I came up with Octavia's response, then I knew it needed to be moved into an epilogue.
I like it, just didn't feel consistant enough.
I gotta say i liked the story. My biggest problem was that as someone who suffers from PTSD and due to a traumatic event who does deal with self destructive behavior I didn't find Vinyl relatable at all and because of of that it did diminish my enjoyment of the story. As I said it was quite well written and an overall enjoyable story but vinyl just wasn't relatable enough for what I was expecting from the title and description
Really sexy.
the sad thing is, Raiden has PTSD. It's sad to see him have a attack, but he was blushing the whole time reading this. :3
The story was a good piece. But there were two things in it that would of made it a lot better. First the epilogue, even though it is supposed to be short, I feel like this one need to be longer and have more details. Second, PTSD, you almost hit he true meaning of it, but not as quite. The clop scenes, however, were really detailed so good on you there, I loved reading them. In all this story is a great piece for anyone who love Vinyl and Octavia Shipping. I have read worse so your on the right track. Even though there were no "I love you" statements in this fiction, I could somewhat feel the connection between the two. In all, it was a good read. And if I were still a critic, Id rate yours 3 out of 5.
...Was Vinyl raped?
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Maybe. Ambiguous.
How sweet. Bloo has a crush on Vinyl.