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Sweetie Belle is leaving Ponyville. As Apple Bloom says goodbye to her, she thinks about everything they've been through together. Does she have what it takes to stop Sweetie going?

This story was inspired by the Foalcon group collab prompt Run, and also by the Snow Patrol song of the same name.

Do people think an "E" tag is appropriate for this story? I've tagged it "T" for now.

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Pony writer

Pony writer #1 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · ·

Awwwwww!!! Love

Flutterpony

Flutterpony #2 · Apr 17th, 2015 · · ·

So adorable! I loved the dramatic build, the atmosphere with the rain, and I think the ambiguity about age and species works well.

I think E is a more accurate rating for this, but if you prefer, T won't hurt it.

The Sexy Assistant

The Sexy Assistant #3 · Apr 17th, 2015 · · ·

So good, I love the ending.

readingbrony

readingbrony #4 · Apr 17th, 2015 · · ·

That was adorable!

VitalSpark

VitalSpark #5 · Apr 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5875391 I can read it without crying, but I couldn't write it without crying.

Also, I've been humming that Snow Patrol song to myself all day.

We Cause Chaos

We Cause Chaos #6 · Apr 18th, 2015 · · ·

THAT WAS ADORABLE.

Arcelia

Arcelia #7 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

This was soooo adorable. It really struck a chord with me, especially since I've been in a similar situation. Except, I didn't get to tell them how I really felt, after all there was no goodbye. I really enjoyed this. Thank you.