Vinyl Scratch is living with the memories of a traumatic event. Octavia Melody is not sure whether her love for the mare is enough to overcome Vinyl's self-destructive behaviour. Can Vinyl put the past in the past? Oh, and some clop!
Well, Vinyl seems to be on the mend. Somewhat. More forward than backward, certainly. We'll see if she keep up the momentum.
I have to side with her rather than Beauty Brass. Sure, the response could've been more tactful, but Vinyl has a right to defend herself and her profession.
I find Octavia's behaviour in the beginning to be rather rude.
Vinyl's crying from the nightmare, and all she does is wipe away the tear then have a shower. Why? They should have shared an emotional moment, but instead it was all; 'Let me just wipe your tear then go have a shower.'
The chapter itself was... OK. Nothing special by a long shot. Fast paced, too many scene breaks to get any enjoyment out of it. Dialogue was rather choppy. This is a good concept, but overall, poorly executed.
Sorry man gonna have to unfav this one, I came here thinking this was going to be a good story, but has failed to entertain me. You can keep the upvote though.
Well, Vinyl seems to be on the mend. Somewhat. More forward than backward, certainly. We'll see if she keep up the momentum.
I have to side with her rather than Beauty Brass. Sure, the response could've been more tactful, but Vinyl has a right to defend herself and her profession.
Oooh, now I want to know how Twilight is going to pay Vinyl, without using money.
I find Octavia's behaviour in the beginning to be rather rude.
Vinyl's crying from the nightmare, and all she does is wipe away the tear then have a shower. Why? They should have shared an emotional moment, but instead it was all; 'Let me just wipe your tear then go have a shower.'
The chapter itself was... OK. Nothing special by a long shot. Fast paced, too many scene breaks to get any enjoyment out of it. Dialogue was rather choppy. This is a good concept, but overall, poorly executed.
Sorry man gonna have to unfav this one, I came here thinking this was going to be a good story, but has failed to entertain me. You can keep the upvote though.
How sweet. Bloo has a crush on Vinyl.