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Jake Shadow Wings


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It's a nice start so far. You do need a prereader though, there are a number of places where you're missing periods.

But how will Vinyl respond to that?

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simple she going to want to join in,

lots of set-up and a good story seems to be in the making. I would like to see where this story is going.

In the description of the story:

These are their stories from the day they joined the Princess' heard to the modern day.

herd, not heard.

This looks interesting.

Are any of the mane six going to be in the herd? I'm asking because having at least one would make any moments with her friends easier to write in. . . . Also I'm a fluttershy fan and twishy is a favored pairing. :yay:

When will Twilight & Octavia make beautiful music together?? Do you intend to do introductory arcs for each mare??
In short, PLEASE keep this story going?? :fluttercry:

has this story been cancelled?

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