I put out fires, write stories, other fun stuff in between too~
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I call Firsties! I know it's immature, but it is fun being first.
Well this was interesting. I hope all these stories don't burn you out (no shitty pun intended) on the Lament stories. You are churning them out so quickly, yet they're all pretty much faultless. Congratulations Sir, have a moustache or something
Excellent start! Bravo! A little rushed, but that's okay. I would have liked more details about the firefight, still, good chapter!
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I never get tired of Lament Stories. It gives me options on what I want to write and I have the attitude that I update when I update.
I couldn't help but notice that Applejack doesn't have her usual Southern accent. Other than that, your as good as gold, fella.
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Personally, I don't like writing it. It feels sorta off for me, that's all.
Nah man, its cool. It's still a great story so far.
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Glad you like it!
I believe you mean "calm.
I believe you forgot the first two letters of "jumping".
Anyway, good chapter. I thoroughly enjoy any story with a good amount of cuddles.
Also, i call Firsties on this chapter's comments!
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Yeah, about two seconds on Google. Now that wasn't so hard, was it?
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Not only is this a wall of text, it's a plot dump for the ages. Show, don't tell. There are at least six elements there that you could include into the narrative as, say, casual talk between AJ and her friends.
lol @ end note.
I don't read your stories for the clop...the stories themselves are nice and make me feel happy...and also remind me i don't have a girlfriend...o well you can't have everything
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Ain't that the truth.
Cheer up lad! Here, have a cute pic!
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Really? i mean she can sense the truth and lie. but why someone dump her?
Good chapter!
5704676 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! So cuuuute
I think this was supposed to be kissed but I could be wrong.
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Naw bro, don't you know it's a thing when you're getting intimate with someone to look them deeply in the eyes, slowly get real close... And then pretend your a snake lol reeeally sets the mood
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I laughed really hard at this, having done it by accident before.
5848328 ...you too???? Haha
And the wait begins...
17 weeks later....
enjoying it a lot but will leave the clop chapter for later.
*gagging*
where the fuck am i
This is a very nice story, very romantic