• Member Since 19th Feb, 2014
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Ahrazell


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So this is the story from your blog

Well now, this is a pleasant surprise.

I already starting to like this story.:raritystarry::pinkiehappy:

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There isn't many stories where someone is Displaced as Cloud.

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Let alone people displaced together and not wanting to get on with the locals

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I've seen a few of those, people tend to not balance two different Displaced.

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I think he meant
about this story have two IDPs
instead of just one

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It's rather easy. Just have one be the main protagonist and use the other as a secondary one

A bit ironic that the Cloud Displaced is named Zack

"Deal." I said, pulling out my card before Sarah could. "Consider it my treat." I told her as she gave me a smile... But why was she blushing?

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Because we need some romantic and sexual tension to keep people returning. Lol jk, all will be explained why he rarely shows or understand emotions unless it is to Sarah later

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More will be coming in a moment. RN I am preparing for a job interview in a few days

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Good luck dude, I need to start searching for a job

Yes. All of my yes.

Also, that conversation at the start was very much lol!:rainbowlaugh:

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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I'm working on it. With the exception of Transferance, I've been going through and updating each of my stories. Still wishing for someone to adopt Transferance

Now this, brings many smiles to my face.

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Yay! Glad you are enjoying yourself

Comment posted by Gizmo Gear deleted Sep 6th, 2019
Comment posted by Gizmo Gear deleted Sep 6th, 2019

"Thank you." I said as we neared the town, and the start of our new life. "Why is there a rainbow coming straight for us?"

INCOMING RAINNUK-

"What is it?" I said before looking down and going quiet as well. In her hands were bloodsoaked bandages, yet my arm, that I knew was totally fucked up, looked fine. Not even a scar. After a moment to process this, I vocalized what was on both of our minds. "What the fuck?!"

"Just sleep it off, you'll be fine"

My favorite line

Why is there a rainbow coming strait for us

TASTES THE RAINBOW MOTHER F*****!!!!!!!

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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I'm trying. Any day now my kid will be born so it is hard juggling that, work, and the stories

This was a awesome realistic chapter. I hope there will be more soon (no rush).

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Yeah, I hate it whenever the Displaced dont act like a real person would. As for the next chapter, I'll just say being a dad plus working for blue hell ie Walmart is hell. I'll get it out as soon as I can, but I won't rush it

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Trust me I have 8 cousins and 4 little little nephew's 3 of the not even older then 3 the youngest almost a year and a preme .

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Lol my son is less than 4months old

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The youngest is almost eight months.

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Soon. Working on it during my work breaks and lunches

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