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ElementBrigade


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بعید است که قصد خرید داشته باشید و از دیجی کالا دست خالی خارج شوید، هر آنچه را که فکرش کنید می‌توانید در دیجی کالا بیابید، مخصوصاً این‌که دیجی کالا شیرینی خرید را برای شما با در نظر گرفتن انواع تخفیف‌ها دو چندان کرده است.

دیجی کالا جذاب‌ترین پیشنهادهای خرید را با مناسب‌ترین قیمت‌ها و در قالب کد تخفیف دیجی کالا بدون محدودیت خرید اول به صورت متنوع و گوناگون به مناسبت نزدیک شدن به سال جدید تدارک دیده است تا همه سلیقه‌ها با هر نوع بودجه‌‌ای از این حال و هوای خوب بهره‌مند شوند.

11221170
it's some scam from a Iran e-commerce compony

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Used google translate mate:
It is unlikely that you will intend to buy and leave Digikala empty-handed, you can find everything you can think of in Digikala, especially since Digikala has doubled the sweets for you by considering all kinds of discounts. Digi Kala has prepared the most attractive purchase offers with the most appropriate prices and in the form of a discount code without any restrictions on the first purchase in various ways on the occasion of the approaching new year, so that all tastes can benefit from this good weather with any kind of budget.

Assuming Digikala meaning dialgia or some shit, then again it can be just a scam/advertise in a different language.......

Anyway first chapter interesting as in reminds me of a movie scene where you begin with the event, while later chapter slowly giving flashbacks of character's past. So far got the spot on with Shinra would most likely force you to work, even if not for money, it will be your loved ones once you are in. Plus experimented agent... so compare her to any of the other experiment say Cloud and Sephy, how would you rate this lass?

Second Chapter is a good concept of Final Fantasy vs Pokemon logic.... I check max stat wise and pokemon still has a somewhat higher advantage, though final fantasy has a max set limit for 255. Though difference is that you can achieve everything with 255 with final fantasy, while with pokemon its a pro and con in terms of trading their best feat, but worsen their weaknesses. Oh it was nice to have Lyra have a recognition of being right in terms of human exists, plus 'ew a lyra with human fetish or a human is myth trope'.... just felt like say it.

So far good start EB and wish you luck with the remaining chapters.

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Ah okay...You think they would've said that in english instead of their foreign language lol

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Ah okay, for the foreign scam thing.

Scaling Emma, I would say...she's on level with a second class soldier. Mainly because Deepground was a project that experiment with mako energy on people as a means to replace the Jenova project seeing how soldiers in said project were experimented with Jenova cells and suffered side affects from it, mainly Geo Sigma.

Also thanks for liking the story so far ^_^

You had my curiosity, but now you got my attention!

Finally,another fanfiction a New world, a new way with real Human character, i like to see where this going :pinkiehappy:
i hope the human don't make peace with the pokemon too soon

Dang, she be packing some heat! Also like the artwork of her, looks really good!

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You can never be to sure of what to expect on a mission. It's nice to be well stocked up and prepared.

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The perks of being able to make your own materia...and smuggling some while on missions for Shinra.

Last line in chapter

“Huh that’s sounds omin-

Remembers chapter title


“OH”

“Like I told Lyra, why would I want to invade a planet that’s not as advanced as my planet?”

Because your kind could easily overpower the residents and get access to the resources of the planet.

Not if we’re caught, but we have someone that can go invisible~,” Lyra said as Emma pressed a button on her wrist, she turned invisible for a moment before turning visible.

"Only if we're caught" I assume you want to say.

if the Weapons are being called, then something being is coming. Wait, what happened to the chunk of JANVA? Did it get warped here too? that's bad for the planet.

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Emma still has it on herself in the container. She's not that reckless to leave it alone.

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I was worried it got lost in transit

working for scummy bosses has that risk and no health insurance and dental package in the contract

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Shinra subjected her to stabbing, mind control (even if it failed) , gunshots, mission that likely to kill her and experiments that are inhuman at best. likely they wrote the contract when she signed in in lawyer jargon that twists in on itself ten fold to cover all possible loopholes.

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Ah okay, I mean you're not wrong for the most part. :3

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Can't spoil much, but I can say all seven of the WEAPONS will be in this story

“...Upon hearing this, she slowly began to make her way around the building. The moment she looked around the corner, she saw what appeared to be some kind of slimy looking lizard, and…was that a blue cat digging around in a dumpster?

Slimy lizard? Deerling is neither slimy nor lizardy. Or is there a third one everyone ignores?

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1.) Mewtwo hates humans.

2.) Mewtwo has very little patience with and is very stubborn.

3.) Mewtwo will go ballistic on finding that there is a human on equs.

Well things are going to go down hill fast. If Lyra just suddenly turns human out of nowhere, then will this happen to other ponies? In fact, what will happen to the pony turned humans?

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She didn't change all of a sudden. It was due to the materia that Emma gave her, remember? Also might want to re word that, because there aren't any other ponies being turned into humans. Unless you meant to say humans turned into pokemon?

she got somewhere with that issue.

Mewtwo will not like the topic of genesplicing.

“First things first. We need to get you some clothes…this world has a clothing store…right?”

Why are you trying to force the twisted human believe that you should be ashamed of your natural beauty onto a race of content nudists? It's not like she is going outside very soon.

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Of course they'll be leaving soon. Can't stay in the same area especially when you have a psychic pokemon trying to find the source of the strange energy surrounding Canterlot and Ponyville. That's just asking for trouble, plus this is Lyra we're talking about. Why wouldn't she want to try on human clothes?

Nice to see another NWNW crossover on this site. I can’t wait to see what direction you plan to take this story in.

the legendary pokemon are in trouble the WEAPONs get serious

Something bad is going to happen, I just know it.

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What? Naw. Nothing bad is going to happen...well bad in a humorous way involving accidental burning.

the picture looks like something from evangelion

Luna is very trust worthy so she doesn't need to worry about it.

And here I am waiting for the backstabbing from the "idiot gods" and holier than thou ponies

Things are going to go nuclear Armageddon. And that is putting it lightly.

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