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Ha that was great definitely earned a like.
Is the next chapter going to be femdom or maledom? ^^
I'm sorry. What are "trigger warnings"? I've heard about them among useless, overblown tumblr feminazis but never understood their purpose.
5777255 It is to allow you to know what kinks or fetishes may be in the story/chapter, so you don't go into a story expecting one thing, and suddenly have watersports going down pinkie's throat.
5777264 Ah. Gotcha.
>Trigger warnings
-10 points from gryffindor
>anthro porn in featured to piss people off
+15 points for gryffindor
Huh. That was more than I was expecting content wise. I like that it started out with a dinner sim rather than jumping straight into the sex. I also think you did some great work with the way Snails behaved (the whole timid act).
5777593 Thank you!
So... the first chapter... is a bonus chapter? How... does that work, actually?
5777943 When I first started writing this, I had no structure in mind. It would just be something I wrote sexy teacher clop in. So, the first thing I did was based off of the picture, "Cheerilee+You=Best Night Ever." Hence the chapter title. I wrote it then, but it took me a bit to get around to the second chapter. By then, I had a more specific idea in mind and it changed, but the second person chapter wouldn't fit, but I wanted to keep it as it was for my artist friend and the first time I'd ever written the style. So, tack it on at the front to slightly pad the word count and bring in more readers, as it is optional if you don't like the style. Also, in case I fuck up and don't finish this for some reason, I have it out already instead of it being me signing my resignation.
What a great fanfic to get me back!
good first chapter, but why is a bonus chapter chapter 1?
5779092 I refer you to this.
5777964
Misspelled "whether" in both the short and long descriptions, and your short description cuts off one word after "whether".
5779201 Whether isn't in the short description.
odd chapter... well, can't wait until the next
5779217 Then whichever description appears in its feature box slot. Point is, it cuts off with "Whether by"
5779300 Not for me.
I'm gonna bookmark this in hopes that the Hidden Gem chapter means what I think it means.
To be honest I think you did a good job on the fetishes in this chapter. And thus one of the best fetishes were born Cheerilee as a naughty school girl!
Please oh please have Silver Spoon come back to school awkwardly fiddling with her skirt to hide the marks on her ass while also smiling. Confused, but happy.
That would just make my day ^_^
That's a misuse of "trigger warning" as a term... how about "Content warning"? TW is meant for stuff that causes things like flashbacks, panic attacks etc., no matter how it's misused on tumblr, among other places.
5781865 Hmm, quite true. Thanks for the tip.
Keep up this flow.
Busty Cheerilee clop with plot?
This is getting better with the chapter.
Also, small derp:
5782164
No, it's good. It's used to express intensity. In this context, it is fine.
it's an alright chapter, but the previous 2 were better.
Wait, I want to try something, let see what happens.
Ryuku?
Up vote this comment if you thought of this guy.
images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/23000000/Ryuk-only-likes-real-apples-ryuk-23007826-570-493.jpg
~Leonzilla
5783730 His name is Ryuku? I didn't know. Thank you for the knowledge.
5783745 Normally I don;t but in to conversations but I like the character, his name is Ryuk and isn't he just the funniest guy to look at.
Hah, I like how disorganized the chapters are. Bonus first, other chapters last.
Also, Cheerilee, why so sad?
Well I do have a teeny tiny inkling about that, but still.
Nicely written however!
5783745 Ryuk actually but that's close enough.
That was surprising. Great job on the role-play fetish. Can't wait to see who Cheer 'befriends' next.
This is amazing.
Very well written. Good depth of description. A quick tip though, maybe change the word 'tits' and 'tit' for something like 'breasts' or 'bosoms'. Otherwise, amazing!
You seem to switch from pony to human throughout the story, you mention hooves a few times, then talk about hands, and then talk about breasts, which a pony wouldn't have, and you also give them clothes, which is unusual for ponyville ponies. You also speak of abs and pecks on snails, it doesn't make any sense. I'm not criticizing, just confused.
5786018 This is anthro. My form of anthro is tails, ears, and fett(hooves in this case) are all fromt he pony, along with thier wings/horns of course. The rest is the humanoid form, so no muzzle, has breasts, fingers, things like that.
5786018 Its anthro man.
I really did enjoy this chapter and not just for the clop either^^
I hope these guys realize how luck they are to have a teacher like Cheerilee who is actually willing to teach them something that will help them in their personal lifes, not just their future jobs
5783730
Fuck yeah (that series was good but FUCKED UP)
I mean...light was okay up until he started killing nice people ;n;
Criminals Okay logical
POLICEMEN WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU LIGHT
5842076
That's right, up till episode 5 when he killed the FBI agent known as Raye Penber just because he was investigating him.
It was down the hill from there.
~Leonzilla
Idk if it just because i have a thing for sexy teachers , or if this was just that good. But my god i loved this
when do we get more
5899682 I... really don't know, I'm sorry. Classes for me finish after next week though, so I hopefully won't be so stressed or busy then, but I have four other projects going on right now too.
Whenever you have time, I hope you will be continuing writing the next chapter. Also who is the pony Cheerilee has anal sex with in bonus chapter?
6005319 The bonus chapter is a second person chapter, so she fucks you.
6005870 Cool. You mean she fucks us the reader?
6009350 eeyup.
6009398 That idea is like http://gph.to/1GvDWnn in a good way