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Autistic Writer


I am the Autistic Writer. I have Autism (Aspergers Syndrome), but that doesn't stop me from writing great stories.

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After a horrible fight, Applejack has broke up with Spike. A year later, Spike and Rarity are getting married. Applejack, realizes the mistake she has made, however will Applejack convince Spike to give them another chance?

Pairing: RarityXSpikeXApplejack

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 52 )

Whoa! Usually its Rarity that breaks up with Spike and he ends up with one of the other mane six but it's the other way around. Applejack is seriously gonna regret what she just did when she sees Spike be a great dragon to Rarity

This is sure different , :pinkiehappy: Can't wait for it to play out.:twilightoops:

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Thanks for the kind words :)

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Funny, i thought it would be an interesting twist that Spike and Applejack has a fight or something

Dammit AJ. Just stop and LISTEN to them for about ten seconds and they'll explain what's going on! Jesus I know she's stubborn but WOW.

I noticed that this story could use some editing due to lack of punctuation in some instances and improperly used punctuation and grammar. I realize that you're autistic and/or maybe English isn't your native language, but I would suggest an editor. Other than that, great plot! I've actually never seen an Applejack x Spike thing before. This story is great!

That seems like a great story. I like how this is going. Good luck.

:moustache: I'm getting hitched
:applejackconfused: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
:raritystarry: She took it rather well. .
:twilightblush: I can fix this
:trollestia: herding law 1233254323 a (c)II 23 ch a

:applejackconfused::rainbowhuh::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightoops::yay: I do !

:moustache: I did , done & dooded

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Yeah, sometimes AJ can be stubborn, but i am sure something will happen soon.

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Huh never seen that before, but thank you

5737968 Honestly... I'd be okay if her and Spike get back together... but I'd be just as okay if they just stayed friends.

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English is actually my first language. I just have problems with grammar. I should be fine though.

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Well, this story could go either way :D

5737980 I know... and it's irritating me.... continue writing it.

AJ is kind of OOC in this.
OOC has three words
There are three sides in a triangle
AJ: Illuminati Confirmed

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I know AJ is kind of OC in this story, but i am sure it won't distract you from the story itself.

5619527 AJ-chan, why'd you not hear him out?! Oh well, more for Rarity! I WILL GO DOWN WITH THIS SHIP!

5800028 As long we get adorable Spike and Rarity moments an OOC Applejack is not what I focus on

Applejack what have you done?

This is why I never going to be in a relationship.

What an idiotic hothead, almost as much as Dash. :ajbemused:

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Yeah, some ponies/dragons can be like that.

I picked up on the Bride of Discord reference straight away! Kudos to you.
Glad to see this finally updated. Please update soon :pinkiesmile:

It's her own immature, hot-headed fault that this happened.

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You mean, she screwed love and now love is screwing with her.

Love is such a strange thing >:)

I love this, please update very soon:ajsmug::ajsmug:

wow i would of wanted spike to be with applejack instead of rarity because i don't like rarity

6297764 I agree! This whole break-up was AJ's fault!

I picked the Bride of Discord reference! :raritywink:

6842022 Seriously. Thanks for replying by the way, lost track of this story and couldn't remember the name.

6842774 definitley! I bet AJ will feel completley silly for not knowing that Spike was going to propose to her before they broke up!

6842989 Ooh I think it's going to be a bit heavier than that, knowing it was her hot head that caused everything to be happening now.

6844229 Well it seems to be abandoned so I suppose there's no point in wondering anymore.

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It's not abandon, i just needed some time to think for the moment.

7478687 A year seems like a REALLY long time to think. :rainbowhuh:

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I've seen people think for much longer, but i needed to think of what i could do for the next couple of chapters plan it out.

7479076 I guess if it's not dead at least...

I hope you can continue this someday.

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