A Painful Realization

Applejack realizes her feelings for Spike, however she is too late and has to bear the pain on her own. However a pair of watchful eyes are upon her.

Pairings in this story
AppleSpike
Sparity

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Scorch215

Scorch215 #1 · Aug 13th, 2016 · 4 · ·

With that EQG tag this ship takes on a whole different and vastly less romantic feeling to it.

flaminkomage

flaminkomage #2 · Aug 14th, 2016 · 2 · ·

I've been looking for a story like this. Nicely done.

(Though you might want to fix that Equestria Girls tag to a Human one...)

Midnight Radiance

Midnight Radiance #3 · Aug 14th, 2016 · 3 · ·

I KNEW IT!!!

The very moment when AJ started thinking on all the things Spike would do with Rarity, I knew. Nice story by the way. I really enjoyed reading it.

Autistic Writer

Autistic Writer #4 · Aug 14th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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Thanks :)

Midnight Radiance

Midnight Radiance #5 · Aug 14th, 2016 · 1 · ·

7478683 Your welcome! and again, nice fic.

daniel90751

daniel90751 #6 · Aug 14th, 2016 · 1 · ·

I liked because it reminds me a lot of myself and the events I have been though. As one person to another feeling down isn't something to be sorry for it's just what we all go through so just give yourself time and find a good friend to be with. At least that is what helped me. Contructive Crtisism although i have never written a fanfic I would like more description of either the area what the times between AJ and Spike were like and who they were before. But I shouldn't really say anything I'm just a random guy who doesn't know what he is talking about ha.. ha.. Yeah. Anyway keep up the works

Nacho