Zane is your average, single father in a society of ponies, a man that has one child to raise in the world they cannot get enough of. Until one cruel mare starts to show a little more than an abusive friendship, and turns into something more.
Okay. I liked the fact that Twilight and Terra (loved the guy's design and personality) actually support Zane over Alex and openly acknowledge their disapproval of Celestia and Luna's cheating of Zane with Alex. Hell, Terra is one quite swell guy as the guy was willing to cut ties with his wife and daughters for betraying Zane and is the only one of the royal family that can see that Alex is a bastard who doesn't even deserve to be king. I'm a little concerned that Sophia had enough strength in her tiny fist to break her father's testicle, but it would be interesting to see her use her "superpower" on Alex's giant horse balls. Hope the next chapter comes soon as I want to see Cosmica, Celestia, Luna, and Alex's faces when they find out Zane joined the council...and that Terra has found himself a new mate.
7124594 maybe you should respect your sisters judgement instead of going behind her back to pick fights with her husband. Kinda sad that you can't even say it to his face you feel the need to go to the internet to do it. Also fuck you for wishing that on someone prick
Why would comsica be on board with cheating and then feel bad about it later? Then she goes and make up some bs about her husband leaving her. No wonder her daughters are screwed up. Big props on Twilight for seeing through the mask of her teacher.
I cried.... this is bucking hilarious(every now and then of course)! But seriously, this thing is so awesome that rainbow dash comes short against this. Dang it, bro. Your stories are da best!
It's my fault. He's banned for three days because I took over his account last night. I'm so sorry for all of this. But I promise that he will be back after his account is freed.
I'm so very sorry for getting him banned for three days.
7125767 Oh. Okay then. It's alright. In fact if it had anything to do with that comment above it is quite understandable why you might have done something. So no worries.
I usually don't write comments , but I must say it : your stories are the best , don't let the ones who tell you otherwise get on you , because you have the support of all your followers
Is no one going to mention that his daughter crushed one of his testicles? Like what the hell? How is that okay? I don't care that he made Cadence cry, the equivalent would be crushing one of a lady's ovaries. Not okay.
"You were going to die, you bucking moron!" She growled, her voice deep and as hateful as the punch to my arm. "One of your testicles burst, and that made your body flood itself with adrenaline. You were already in shock by the time the surgeons started on you. They even used Shining Armor as a conductor to amplify the spells they used to save your life!"
Um....what? Adrenaline and noredrenaline aren’t produced by the testicles...they are produced by the adrenal glands and some parts of the nervous system (the neurons to be precise). I have never heard nor red before about adrenaline nor noradrenaline being produced by the testes.
The biggest hormone they produce (in terms of quantity that is) is testosterone, not adrenaline.
8410401 Contrary to popular belief such a thing doesn't slow down sperm or hormone production for more than a week. What would be bad is if they had to amputate it. Now that would be worth fussing over.
"You were going to die, you bucking moron!" She growled, her voice deep and as hateful as the punch to my arm. "One of your testicles burst, and that made your body flood itself with adrenaline. You were already in shock by the time the surgeons started on you. They even used Shining Armor as a conductor to amplify the spells they used to save your life!"
Okay. I liked the fact that Twilight and Terra (loved the guy's design and personality) actually support Zane over Alex and openly acknowledge their disapproval of Celestia and Luna's cheating of Zane with Alex. Hell, Terra is one quite swell guy as the guy was willing to cut ties with his wife and daughters for betraying Zane and is the only one of the royal family that can see that Alex is a bastard who doesn't even deserve to be king. I'm a little concerned that Sophia had enough strength in her tiny fist to break her father's testicle, but it would be interesting to see her use her "superpower" on Alex's giant horse balls. Hope the next chapter comes soon as I want to see Cosmica, Celestia, Luna, and Alex's faces when they find out Zane joined the council...and that Terra has found himself a new mate.
Tis good
plot twist did not expect
.... Goes crazy with power
Yes! For the love of God, yes! Get rekt motherfuckers!
I only have two responses to this. First off, love the pacing and characters. Do not like Sophine going too hard on his balls. Second.
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Karma the balance of life
Seriously, you write stories for a girl's cartoon!?
My god, I thought you were a piece of work before, but now I see how pathetic and sick you are.
My sister would have been better off if that drunk driver took you out. Not for good, but enough to make her leave your sorry ass.
7124487 fuck off cockwaffle his life is none of your consern
7124525
It is since it involves my sister. Feel, why I am saying that when you weirdos will defend one of your own.
Besides, his writing sucks.
7124594 maybe you should respect your sisters judgement instead of going behind her back to pick fights with her husband. Kinda sad that you can't even say it to his face you feel the need to go to the internet to do it. Also fuck you for wishing that on someone prick
7124594 Nice voting alt, kiddo
7124606
Blocked. That's all there is to it because I don't have time to deal with someone who is long way from where I am.
Now if you will excuse me, I have an eight month old daughter who needs to be fed.
7124682 sorry it's like 3 in the morning and I'm incredibly tired. The comment set me off lol
7124688
Don't let it. She's just forgotten family. Now you have a good night.
Why would comsica be on board with cheating and then feel bad about it later? Then she goes and make up some bs about her husband leaving her. No wonder her daughters are screwed up. Big props on Twilight for seeing through the mask of her teacher.
7124487
Try harder, Mister Troll.
7124487
So uh... Why are you here? A website that writes stories about a little girl's cartoon?
And how is the author "pathetic" heck, he's been through a lot, he's the strongest guy I know on this website.
Also what do you mean by "sick" do mean that writing stories for a little girl's show is sick?
7124594
This right here is the kind of person that makes me lose all faith in humanity the second a shred of it comes back.
I cried.... this is bucking hilarious(every now and then of course)! But seriously, this thing is so awesome that rainbow dash comes short against this. Dang it, bro. Your stories are da best!
Wow, i really hope this situation will sink into the Little hellion Sophias head, i mean she actullly half way castrated her own dad!
Was the author banned?
7125677
It's my fault. He's banned for three days because I took over his account last night. I'm so sorry for all of this. But I promise that he will be back after his account is freed.
I'm so very sorry for getting him banned for three days.
7125767
Oh. Okay then. It's alright. In fact if it had anything to do with that comment above it is quite understandable why you might have done something.
So no worries.
I usually don't write comments , but I must say it : your stories are the best , don't let the ones who tell you otherwise get on you , because you have the support of all your followers
Is no one going to mention that his daughter crushed one of his testicles? Like what the hell? How is that okay? I don't care that he made Cadence cry, the equivalent would be crushing one of a lady's ovaries. Not okay.
She turned him into a one-nut-wonder XD, good luck having kids dude.
Um....what? Adrenaline and noredrenaline aren’t produced by the testicles...they are produced by the adrenal glands and some parts of the nervous system (the neurons to be precise). I have never heard nor red before about adrenaline nor noradrenaline being produced by the testes.
The biggest hormone they produce (in terms of quantity that is) is testosterone, not adrenaline.
8410401
Contrary to popular belief such a thing doesn't slow down sperm or hormone production for more than a week. What would be bad is if they had to amputate it. Now that would be worth fussing over.
9244199
Pain, and shit, something breaking,
Remind me what adrenaline is for
wait... she... so sophie just... i...
what!?