Zane is your average, single father in a society of ponies, a man that has one child to raise in the world they cannot get enough of. Until one cruel mare starts to show a little more than an abusive friendship, and turns into something more.
Poor Zane, that ending was shocking. Nut punch from your kid is not fun. Still, it was nice to see Zane express how much he doesn't want to go back to Celestia and Luna. Hope,the next chapter comes soon.
Well, on one hand I want to tell Sophie that the reason her dad lost it was due to bringing up old memories and pains of betrayal from the two mares, (that Cadance wants him to back due to her belief of healed love). But on the other hand I feel like he slightly deserve that since he could of handle it better. Then again when one is full of anger and bitter-- there's not many options of calming down-- especially when someone assume that a broken heart can be fixed. Sometimes you can't 'fixed' a relationship, at times you can-- but in other times you can't fix one if the person wants nothing to do with them. Sometimes you just need to accept that fact and move on...although some people are stubborn to accept that answer and keep trying.
Yes I was waiting for this. I saw give Twilight a chance not because I like her but I want her to chew out Celestia and Luna for cheating. It will show her growth as an independent mare and she would stop worshiping the Princess.
Is it just me, or is it odd that every comment yesterday has one dislike?
Seriously, I know dislike come random in numbers, but to be the sequence of one and no more. Call me crazy, but I think a certain someone I pissed off is still very butt hurt.
A really interesting story so far, and i am looking foward to see where it will go in the future, oh and he really needs to give his daughter the spanking of a lifetime, there are things you just don't do to your father, and nailing him in the family jewels are on top of the frikking list!
I was given a small poke to my chest as she sat up. "Because I confessed to you a couple hours ago and Cadance is pressing to have you give those jerks another chance. The last thing I want is to become a rebound mare if you were to see them again."
"For fuck's sake Cadance, I told you to stop asking me and I meant it." I yelled scathingly without any consideration as to what this will do to her. But I just could not take anymore of her needy persistence to fix everyone's love problems. "You're just like a marriage counselor that only see the good of things. Well guess what, you cannot fix me or what I had with Luna and Celestia. You can't bring me to forgiving them or my brother or the queen. I chose to leave and shut out almost everyone to get past that betrayal. Now do me a big favor and fucking drop this bullshit fantasy you have of fixing my problems, because I don't want your fucking help!"
If I recall the first chapter correctly, Zane has a serious problem (more like life-threatening) regarding the nervous system on his heart. Should he ever feel anger, anxiety, sadness or be exposed to adrenaline, his heart rate will change and he will suffer from an arritmia that will end up killing him since the calcium, sodium and potassium that regulate his heartbeat will go awry and give him a heart arrest, which will en duo killing him.
And just like any problem of this type of nature (as in any chronic disease, allergy, etc) regardless if you take the medication to regulate/control the problem, it will still be there.
All explanations aside, why hasn’t Zane suffered from arritmia right now, taking into consideration that he is pissed at Cadence which in turn forces his body to produce a small amount of adrenaline in response to said anger.
I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but I think that huge fact about Zane was conveniently ignored for the sake of him snapping at Cadence.
i have no idea where this is going.
Poor Zane, that ending was shocking. Nut punch from your kid is not fun. Still, it was nice to see Zane express how much he doesn't want to go back to Celestia and Luna. Hope,the next chapter comes soon.
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Yep it sucks to be Zane
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A bit sidetracked with Sophia, bit it's a development of Umbra and Zane, along with Zane's everyday life being more than normal.
Well, on one hand I want to tell Sophie that the reason her dad lost it was due to bringing up old memories and pains of betrayal from the two mares, (that Cadance wants him to back due to her belief of healed love). But on the other hand I feel like he slightly deserve that since he could of handle it better. Then again when one is full of anger and bitter-- there's not many options of calming down-- especially when someone assume that a broken heart can be fixed.
Sometimes you can't 'fixed' a relationship, at times you can-- but in other times you can't fix one if the person wants nothing to do with them. Sometimes you just need to accept that fact and move on...although some people are stubborn to accept that answer and keep trying.
Yes I was waiting for this. I saw give Twilight a chance not because I like her but I want her to chew out Celestia and Luna for cheating. It will show her growth as an independent mare and she would stop worshiping the Princess.
Well at least Sophie didn't kick Zane in the dick.
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Is it just me, or is it odd that every comment yesterday has one dislike?
Seriously, I know dislike come random in numbers, but to be the sequence of one and no more. Call me crazy, but I think a certain someone I pissed off is still very butt hurt.
7014610 *shrug* eh it's possible, and they may be butt hurt that we have our own opinions on this situation.
I am going to wait (hopefully not long) for shit to hit the fan and brothers to hit the coffin
K.O, also, ITS ALIVE!
A really interesting story so far, and i am looking foward to see where it will go in the future, oh and he really needs to give his daughter the spanking of a lifetime, there are things you just don't do to your father, and nailing him in the family jewels are on top of the frikking list!
Ok, i like the plot, the writing, the depth of the feelings and the sheer cuteness that sophia displais when in screen....More please??
Girl was raise good! Also, fuck Alex.
Kid plays WAY too many video games...
7112186 he has a illness called shotgun to the face the way to cure it is with a nuclear detonation
It's official, the daughter is the avatar of the author's will, she's getting meme-mier by the chapter
Shit she punched him in the nuts!
That little brat would gotten her backside whopped!
If I recall the first chapter correctly, Zane has a serious problem (more like life-threatening) regarding the nervous system on his heart. Should he ever feel anger, anxiety, sadness or be exposed to adrenaline, his heart rate will change and he will suffer from an arritmia that will end up killing him since the calcium, sodium and potassium that regulate his heartbeat will go awry and give him a heart arrest, which will en duo killing him.
And just like any problem of this type of nature (as in any chronic disease, allergy, etc) regardless if you take the medication to regulate/control the problem, it will still be there.
All explanations aside, why hasn’t Zane suffered from arritmia right now, taking into consideration that he is pissed at Cadence which in turn forces his body to produce a small amount of adrenaline in response to said anger.
I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but I think that huge fact about Zane was conveniently ignored for the sake of him snapping at Cadence.