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SaiyanUltima
There really is not much to say, except I am here for the same reason I write on Fanfiction. I want to entertain you with my writing, not just detail it but make you feel that you are in the story.
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being a man and taking care of your kid I like where this is going
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Umm...is there a prequel or companion story to this story? Because for a first chapter, it was intense and I truly felt outrage for Zanes plight!!! Brothers shouldn't do that to their brothers!!! They just shouldn't and I truly felt bad for him!!!
Okay zane and umbras fighting reminds me of something I read once. It went like "bitch I'll fucking cut you".
This story is so bold!
And its only the first chapter!
So his brother Alex was turned into an alicorn?
That scene with that bastard Alex hit every single moral outrage button I had and I hope he suffers a horrible fate after losing everything he has in his life before his hopefully brutal and long-lasting death!!!
Damn this was a nice read.
5817216 Spikes made of salt in a pool of lemon juice after getting dropped down a pit work?
This story is good!!! Please sir can I read some more?
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Yes, but first I must write the next chapter.
so, Luna's a dumb ass bitch that is too naive to see she was being used and Alex is a fucking prick that should die in the slowest and most agonizing why possible.
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Thanks for summing that up! Now to find a mallet for dear ol Alex
When us the next update
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I'm working on it, but if you didn't read my blog. I had surgery, so I'm doing my best in a hospital bed.
At least the WiFi helps.
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OMG
So sorry man I hope you get better.
I see what your doing he's going to get with umber but Luna is going to try to take them apart. Very clever.
I know Zanes pain from personal experience. I was laying in bed one night with my wife laying right next to me, her name was also Luna. I layed there in bed wondering why we have not been active for over 4 months. So after a long day at work I walk in on her in my home studio room having sex with one of my closest friends that I ONCE DARED CALLED A BROTHER
So, she starts begging me to stay, I'm stupid enough to say yes because I wanted to try and work this out, and that BITCH runs off with all my money that I had saved up and even borrowed from family and friends to open my own business!
SO YA, I know Zane feels
Good story though, sorry about hearing you are in surgery, hope you get well soon
5956386 Karma will get that bitch man, don't you worry. This story is finally something I've been looking for, awesome Saiyan.
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So you are hater on Seasons of Darkness, but you like this one....
Serious question; Have you even read the latest chapter to Seasons of Darkness, or are you one of those angry reviwers that just enjoys berating people's work???
5982993 I'm an Angry Reviewer who hates the same thing that happens over and over again, in other words your writing is good but the plot pisses me off.
Mostly because it keeps happening and I hate weakness.
As for Seasons of Darkness I have read the latest on Fanfiction but I still think you need to redo it, you know for the parts he wept like a baby and got his ass handed to him.
5982993 Going to update it soon man? Oh and for those downgrading me, go fuck yourselves.
Please continue this I love this and it's only chapter one
I approve of this story's premise and thus far execution. I would like to read more, if you would...
So will there be another chapter in the near(ish) future? Very much would like to see this continue!
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Yes
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Woohoo!
5986009 No you are a little douche that gets butt hurt about everything then threatens people with physical violence when they call you on your immature and juvenile bullshit.
For the love of Christ on a bike. Get rid of the self promotion part in your story. And trust me stories where the person knows about Equestria rarely if ever good. I love the concept of a single father in Equestria but him knowing about fanfic writers as well as knowing about the show sort of makes it meh.
6155633 Man you don't know when to fuck off do you? Well either that or you're too damn stupid to comprehend it.
Derp!
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I'm almost done with chapter two. I should have it up in one hour.
Yes this story updated
Glad to see this story updated. I got to say that Alex sounds like a real piece of work and Andromeda (and by extension Celestia and Luna) are not that great for making a prick like Alex a member of the Royal Family and ignoring Zane for being justifiably angry at them. Then again, it's his perspective, so it might be necessary to see him interact with his sibling and the Princesses. I'm happy that this story was finally updated after so long. Will the next chapter come soon?
need background story on how this all came to be.
Forgot to add, wasn't Andromeda's name in the first chapter Cosmica. Also, when did Zane dated Celestia? The previous chapter just said that he was with Luna. Finally, did Alex somehow become an Alicorn when he entered Equestria.
Thanks for the update! I missed this
Loving this story so far. But its seems abit fast, pacing wise. Then again, we were told this would only be a 3-5 chapter story. Shame. This would make a great series if it was stretched out into a 50-something chapter story. Looking forward to the new chapters.
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Craps, you're right.
I found those two spots and fixed that. Her name is Cosmica, not Andromeda.
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I can make it longer. Maybe 10-20 chapters.
awesome chapter! would say more bit typing on a phone sucks haha.
awesome chapter! would say more bit typing on a phone sucks haha.
You know i liked it and want to see the rest though now moew Zane with her daughter,
Also i must say that this equestria is realistic, i mean that animals here mate then only the female raise the baby and if she dies the baby is orphan
Oh I can already feel the anger and saltiness coming off of Cadance right now.
And I was laughing like Geoff was in this video when I got to the end.
Two things
1. As Thomas Jefferson would say, "The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants." so keep calm and death to the king.
2. Also I would just play this music
and give the f**ker my favorite birds, and I am not talking about the ones that fly.
I wouldn't be surprised if Zane just snaps...damn...he's got one hell of a streak of bad luck...
I stand by my previous statement. This story is really fantastic, so far.
Kinda wanna see a bit of Luna trying to get back and him being like witch please
The brother should die!!! Make him reveal his wickedness so that he may be smited by the heavens!!!!
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Your wish will come true, but not by the heavens.
No, by a sexy unicorn that catches him hurting a certain someone behind closed doors. And let's just say that even the Queen of Equestria will be afraid to see this unicorn go bat-shit crazy on him.
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I can do that.