Little filly Twilight read anything she found. Anything, that included classic romantic novels, and, though she found the idea of being carried away by a stallion a dumb one. Now however she has her eyes on someone...only it isn't a he, at all. and it is one of her best friends.
Pretty good, but I recommend that you get an editor to help you smooth out the kinks. Liked!
1st.
Pretty nice story. Liked.
2nd.
What did RD did? I don't get that!
Cute. It left me wanting more.
What about onions? Or ogres?
5643786 What they stink of sulfur?
5644300 No, they have layers! (Shrek reference)
5644621 lol
Yeah, would be a good idea to get a editor. Nice story though!
Hazelnuts? Yech! Oh, and good story!