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FoxWithAMask
English geek, yep, that's me. I just want to spead joy with my stories and make people smileand I'm only just realising how cheesy this sounds. Meh.
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and thus twilight got nommed by a spider
FRAK YES!!!!!! The movie Eight-Legged Freaks meets Marvel comics Man-Spider in a thrilling horror story of epic proportions!!! Let the bodies hit the floor!!!
So.... is he a spider? A vampire? A zombie? A spirebie? WHAT IS HE!??!
This has some serious potential, though I feel it could be better if it was more flushed out.
This? I like it. It's different. It's unique. He's become Jack the Ripper. Wait, is that his name? OH, THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!
Anyways, liked and faved!
And so. Canterlot is now doomed to annihilation.
More please!
MOAR PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
5585794 Er...no. He's just a human-spider hybrid. Nothing supernatural about him. He just has a taste for brains.
5594711 oh. Well. That's a bit anticlimactic. Aw well. But you know what would be great? If we knew HOW he became this human - spider... thing. Some backstory!
5594893 Maybe in the future.
Oh my god... this is incredible.
This is an amazing story you have here so far, now please don't ruin it by having him warm up to the ponies later on like in every fricken HiE story nowadays.
5601485 Thank you!
5619935 Don't worry, the only possible way he'll be nice to the ponies is via intense brainwashing. Like...Elements of Harmony level brainwashing. But...even if that does happen he'll snap out of it, use it to his advantage and massacre the town during the night. So no, no pony friends.
And I'm done. Weak Protagonist jackass.
… Yikes… This one is effective… Ruthlessly so… Reminds me of Acnologia from Fairy Tail.
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A god in scaly lizard form, he doesn't even care for humans. He doesn't bother speaking to them, because let's be honest, do YOU speak to stupid ants as you squash them under your heel? He also has the power to remove a particularly large island from an ocean. So, yeah. Until we get a name, this spider thing is Acnologia.
This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories.
THIS is how you write a monster story.
5644748 Thanks!
5644748 Same here.
Cruel. I like it.
Hmm... It's good... Not enough blood... Or viscera, for that matter. While ripping the heart out and feeding it was a nice touch, there was not enough of that. All we're really seeing is Blacklight go around killing shit. The pet thing... Not bad, but could be better. Not enough scenes describing it. Yeah, cut off the legs. Woo, collar. Yay, 'pet'. Clever words are clever. But, I want a story to make me shudder as he rips them open, and feeds them their internal organs. I want Mortal Kombat levels of death. The story is fantastic, don't get me wrong. But, it is simply just not enough. Gimme more gore, and I'll keep coming back for more. (Oh, hey, a rhyme! I seem to do that sometimes!)
Yay! Its back.
This is gonna be a looooooooong hunt.
Very good work, this was a bit rushed but good never the less.
I'm really enjoying the plot, and all the opportunites it brings for the future, you're wording is on point and while you are descriptive you are only descriptive on certian parts.
Thanks for the read, and hopefully you can write more soon.
~☆The Fallen Phantom
Blood for the blood god! Skulls for the skull throne!
Finnish her!
the chaos gods smile down apon you spider/human thing!
I want to see him do a Fatality on her.
This one is called The Spider? An intriguing title… Although, I do believe that 'Black Widower' is MUCH more appropriate.
And another thing… What in the name of the Dalek Emperor does our villain protagonist look like? I'm picturing something similar to Venom, but with extra legs growing from its back, something like this:
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Replace the multiple tentacles with only two (or was it four?) large, spiked legs.
By the way, can it even talk, or is it merely choosing to not talk to 'inferior life forms'?
5996098 Well, The Spider is the name Celestia gave it (Much to the chagrin of Griffin) and isn't it's actual name. Also, I'm working on an image, but...I'm a terrible artist, so it looks awful. It has six spider legs coming from its back.
As for the rest...well, all will be revealed in time.
5998221 I know that, but wouldn't 'Black Widower' just sound cooler? Because 'widower' means 'male widow'- which he probably is- or it can sound like 'one who makes widows'. Which is pretty much his MO. Kill one person, and let everyone else suffer for it.
And can it actually talk, or does it choose not to? Kinda didn't answer that.
5998638
Don't want to ruin things for readers. You'll find out soon.
5999133 Ah. But seriously, doesn't 'Black Widower' sound badass?
Beautiful.
Brilliant.
BLOODY.
Just call it "8-Legged Death". Or is that too cheesy?
Or however many legs it has.
And now twilight sees herself as a monster. Yay!
more please!
6199869 Twilight? That's not Twilight. That's Blazing. And oh, I have plans for her!
6200109 ... i knew that!... um... yeah!
Its some kind of spider like beast, but a man as well... I call him Arthropod man! To the spider web
i love this story and you man (so much homo)
Ehhhhhhh I'll just have to make this clear I guess. All the strength in the world and all the metal limbs you can attach to yourself will never beat straight up combat experience. A hardened soldier who's regarded as the best would wipe the floor with Blazing because of a few reasons but mostly because she
1 hasn't fought the guy before and therefore has no idea what he can do
2 she is so sure she'll win that she barely thinks about she's doing.
Fighting isn't about instinct and beating your opponent until they can't move anymore, it's about looking for chinks in their armour. You find a weakness and exploit it. Blazing hasn't fought an actual fighter so she'd have no idea how to cover her weaknesses or stop opponents from noticing them. A soldier with Bronzes experience should be able to see that she's greener than the bloody grass and take her down easily, metal legs or no metal legs she's still new to fighting.
From all the talk of "training" I get a severe Dragonball Z vibe but they at least have excuses and don't all fall apart when spider people punch them.
6505209 The thing about that is skill in a military is relative to the overall skill of the soldiers of a military. The Royal guard in both the tv show and hear are really bad soldiers, and I meen really bad. In the changeling invasion the royal guard was completely wiped out in minutes of the changeling attack. The absolute best of a group like that is not going to be very impressive compared to the very best of an army that has gotten a into an actual war before. Besides how much battle experience has Bronze sword really had? Especially against an enemy who is practically a supersoldier at this point. My point is that Bronze has probably a lot less experience than how celestia said he had especially fighting opponents who are not only far stronger and faster than him, but also are way more durable than him in certain places thanks to the mettle limbs Blazing now has.
MAY THE FILTHY XENO BLOOD COVER THE GROUND!
MORE BLOOD,MORE VIOLENCE,MORE DEATH!
7355660 Big thing here is that she's not a Space Marine. She can be faster than light but she still can't perceive that speed. Her strength is completely new. If it's really such a huge upgrade from before then she'd be moving weirdly for days and punches would break her shoulders/tear her new arms off.
Someone with some knowledge of fighting is infinitely greater than someone with none. If the first someone has been in an actual fight, or even many, they would mop the floor with the second.
If she really is doing this good because she's so stupidly strong then I'm just going to refer to her as Ultramarine from now on. Clearly someone as undeservingly successful as she is has much in common with Matt Ward's favourite Smurfs.
The Blueblood hate is getting old
What the FUCK is this guy? Because Homo Sapiens doesn't do this. Homo Abominus? Maybe
Cookie if you get the reference, btw
Oh. Oh. Now this.
THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR.
Just what i needed after dinner...not.
Is it ok if I call him sipdey
So...what does he/she look like? I didn't really feel like i got a good enough description of what this creature's form looks like. it might just be me, who knows?