A monster roams the streets of Manehattan, death follows its every step. The gangs and mobs think it is just a myth, meant to scare them from the streets. They have never been so wrong. The monster is real. And its next target is Princess Twilight.
This one is called The Spider? An intriguing title… Although, I do believe that 'Black Widower' is MUCH more appropriate.
And another thing… What in the name of the Dalek Emperor does our villain protagonist look like? I'm picturing something similar to Venom, but with extra legs growing from its back, something like this: latimesblogs.latimes.com/.a/6a00d8341c630a53ef0168e8800e84970c-pi
Replace the multiple tentacles with only two (or was it four?) large, spiked legs.
By the way, can it even talk, or is it merely choosing to not talk to 'inferior life forms'?
5996098 Well, The Spider is the name Celestia gave it (Much to the chagrin of Griffin) and isn't it's actual name. Also, I'm working on an image, but...I'm a terrible artist, so it looks awful. It has six spider legs coming from its back.
As for the rest...well, all will be revealed in time.
5998221 I know that, but wouldn't 'Black Widower' just sound cooler? Because 'widower' means 'male widow'- which he probably is- or it can sound like 'one who makes widows'. Which is pretty much his MO. Kill one person, and let everyone else suffer for it.
And can it actually talk, or does it choose not to? Kinda didn't answer that.
Ehhhhhhh I'll just have to make this clear I guess. All the strength in the world and all the metal limbs you can attach to yourself will never beat straight up combat experience. A hardened soldier who's regarded as the best would wipe the floor with Blazing because of a few reasons but mostly because she 1 hasn't fought the guy before and therefore has no idea what he can do 2 she is so sure she'll win that she barely thinks about she's doing. Fighting isn't about instinct and beating your opponent until they can't move anymore, it's about looking for chinks in their armour. You find a weakness and exploit it. Blazing hasn't fought an actual fighter so she'd have no idea how to cover her weaknesses or stop opponents from noticing them. A soldier with Bronzes experience should be able to see that she's greener than the bloody grass and take her down easily, metal legs or no metal legs she's still new to fighting. From all the talk of "training" I get a severe Dragonball Z vibe but they at least have excuses and don't all fall apart when spider people punch them.
6505209 The thing about that is skill in a military is relative to the overall skill of the soldiers of a military. The Royal guard in both the tv show and hear are really bad soldiers, and I meen really bad. In the changeling invasion the royal guard was completely wiped out in minutes of the changeling attack. The absolute best of a group like that is not going to be very impressive compared to the very best of an army that has gotten a into an actual war before. Besides how much battle experience has Bronze sword really had? Especially against an enemy who is practically a supersoldier at this point. My point is that Bronze has probably a lot less experience than how celestia said he had especially fighting opponents who are not only far stronger and faster than him, but also are way more durable than him in certain places thanks to the mettle limbs Blazing now has.
7355660 And the spider (don't know what his name is) has killed before. He is someone that is both stealthy and fighting type. Over al, he has more experience in killing then cyborg Blaze over there.
5996098 Celestia has the imagination of a 5 year old girl when it comes to names. 5998221 Have you tried getting someone on Deviantart that you know to commission an art piece for you? It would be much easier that way
Blood for the blood god! Skulls for the skull throne!
Finnish her!
the chaos gods smile down apon you spider/human thing!
I want to see him do a Fatality on her.
This one is called The Spider? An intriguing title… Although, I do believe that 'Black Widower' is MUCH more appropriate.
And another thing… What in the name of the Dalek Emperor does our villain protagonist look like? I'm picturing something similar to Venom, but with extra legs growing from its back, something like this:
latimesblogs.latimes.com/.a/6a00d8341c630a53ef0168e8800e84970c-pi
Replace the multiple tentacles with only two (or was it four?) large, spiked legs.
By the way, can it even talk, or is it merely choosing to not talk to 'inferior life forms'?
5996098 Well, The Spider is the name Celestia gave it (Much to the chagrin of Griffin) and isn't it's actual name. Also, I'm working on an image, but...I'm a terrible artist, so it looks awful. It has six spider legs coming from its back.
As for the rest...well, all will be revealed in time.
5998221 I know that, but wouldn't 'Black Widower' just sound cooler? Because 'widower' means 'male widow'- which he probably is- or it can sound like 'one who makes widows'. Which is pretty much his MO. Kill one person, and let everyone else suffer for it.
And can it actually talk, or does it choose not to? Kinda didn't answer that.
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Don't want to ruin things for readers. You'll find out soon.
5999133 Ah. But seriously, doesn't 'Black Widower' sound badass?
Just call it "8-Legged Death". Or is that too cheesy?
Or however many legs it has.
Ehhhhhhh I'll just have to make this clear I guess. All the strength in the world and all the metal limbs you can attach to yourself will never beat straight up combat experience. A hardened soldier who's regarded as the best would wipe the floor with Blazing because of a few reasons but mostly because she
1 hasn't fought the guy before and therefore has no idea what he can do
2 she is so sure she'll win that she barely thinks about she's doing.
Fighting isn't about instinct and beating your opponent until they can't move anymore, it's about looking for chinks in their armour. You find a weakness and exploit it. Blazing hasn't fought an actual fighter so she'd have no idea how to cover her weaknesses or stop opponents from noticing them. A soldier with Bronzes experience should be able to see that she's greener than the bloody grass and take her down easily, metal legs or no metal legs she's still new to fighting.
From all the talk of "training" I get a severe Dragonball Z vibe but they at least have excuses and don't all fall apart when spider people punch them.
6505209 The thing about that is skill in a military is relative to the overall skill of the soldiers of a military. The Royal guard in both the tv show and hear are really bad soldiers, and I meen really bad. In the changeling invasion the royal guard was completely wiped out in minutes of the changeling attack. The absolute best of a group like that is not going to be very impressive compared to the very best of an army that has gotten a into an actual war before. Besides how much battle experience has Bronze sword really had? Especially against an enemy who is practically a supersoldier at this point. My point is that Bronze has probably a lot less experience than how celestia said he had especially fighting opponents who are not only far stronger and faster than him, but also are way more durable than him in certain places thanks to the mettle limbs Blazing now has.
7355660 And the spider (don't know what his name is) has killed before. He is someone that is both stealthy and fighting type. Over al, he has more experience in killing then cyborg Blaze over there.
I like Griffin.
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Celestia has the imagination of a 5 year old girl when it comes to names.
5998221
Have you tried getting someone on Deviantart that you know to commission an art piece for you? It would be much easier that way