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Mr Absorption


To be honest I just write these stories as justification for their goofy titles.

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Comment posted by rikusorasephiroth deleted Oct 1st, 2015

Ah. I was wondering where the hell the words were.

Welcome Back, Bathspounge

Neopets has gotten really crappy for Aus servers since Jumpstart took over.

5818252
I wouldn't know about that, I'm american.

6248783
Why not? Bathspounge has been a faggot forever, why should now be any different?

...I've sopped trying to follow the half-arsed story, and just skip to the sex at this point.

6600608 Considering this chapter had me question whether this had shifted into a human fic and back at least a half-dozen times, what did you expect?

6602245
I mean, I'm agreeing with you, the story is pretty spastic and unfocused. And I f you're just skipping to the sex, then at least I'm good at writing the sex.

7081011
There's been talk of it. What would you want in a third book?

7081282 A couple dozen hyper-preg mares, more cumflation and a bit less nonsensical random crap?

7082437
Hyper preg, more cumflation, and less plot? At least one of those is planned. Thanks for the input. If anyone else has feedback, be sure to give it to me.

7083319 No no! Not less plot! More plot, less purposeless tangents.

7083373
I'm not sure what you mean. Can you give me an example of the passages you don't like so I can avoid writing like them in future?

7083444 From this part to when it cuts back

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Hyper-Ass Apocalypse Fire-Cum:

7083462
That part is the reason I wrote this whole story.

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