• Published 3rd Mar 2015
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The Tale of Bath2pounge Too: Return of the Bath2pounge - Mr Absorption

Comments ( 8 )

7081011
There's been talk of it. What would you want in a third book?

7081282 A couple dozen hyper-preg mares, more cumflation and a bit less nonsensical random crap?

7082437
Hyper preg, more cumflation, and less plot? At least one of those is planned. Thanks for the input. If anyone else has feedback, be sure to give it to me.

7083319 No no! Not less plot! More plot, less purposeless tangents.

7083373
I'm not sure what you mean. Can you give me an example of the passages you don't like so I can avoid writing like them in future?

7083444 From this part to when it cuts back

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Hyper-Ass Apocalypse Fire-Cum:

7083462
That part is the reason I wrote this whole story.

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