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Remedyfortheheart
My name is Remedy. Call me Remi. I've recently come into the fandom and have always had a secret passion and natural knack for writing and reading. So now with that said I'm setting it to the test.
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Nice prelude.
This is pretty good so far. I like the colored text.
There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too major. Just a couple of missing commas. And it feels a bit rushed, so maybe slow the pace down a notch. Aside from that, good start. I like the way you changed the colours of the dialogue for each of the mane six. Very clever! I am awaiting the next chapter.
The main six fight for Spike
Rarity goes first .
Dear Celestia,
Sharing is nice,
Your fateful student Twilight Sparkle.
cc: Spike here, Wow, Sharing is great !
PS. I need more sleep.
This is an excellent start to an excellent series! Continue the good work and you'll gain yourself a loyal watcher ;3
Thank you all. In just a couple hours of it's release I've just become completely flattered by the comments. I'll continue working on a another chapter soon. Also Gummy. I'll keep in mine that you like detail. I've tried to place the story to an easy smooth read, but I will continue improving on my writing. Thank you all for the support of my very first story!
Interesting; couple of spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing that spins you right out or anything. Good start.
Not a bad start. The color coded dialog is a bit annoying, but that's minor enough to ignore.
The chapter was hot and the argument about Dusk's name is funny. Have a fav.
5527948 Wow. I'm so flattered! In two days. I have over 14,000 of a story published for your enjoyment. If this keeps up I'll have the next chapter up in no time. Don't forget I need to know who to write about next in my next chapter.
This is amazing, keep it up ;3
Also! Who is your favourite ship from the Mane 6 x Male 6?
5528666 Well Mewtwo. I'd most likely have to say that my fav is not a pair. Not just two ponies of the main six. Yet I love it when the mane six all seem to have a connection with one another. In other words. One character doing the other five or just pretty much six dirty friends all having some good times. If I I'd have to choose a pair. It mostly would OC ponies but I favor Appledash. Makes more sense with those as the stories would be endless about their romance.
>>Remedyfortheheart
Ohhhh... Oki :3
Good to know, my favourite is Dash&Blitz
Anyway, amazing work so far, you are a great writer
5528937 My bad you were asking 63 pair. Hm. Well I always found Fluttershyxbutterscotch to be sweet together.
My only issue atm is the need for spacing in the names. You have it down for the normal mane 6, I.E., Twilight Sparkle, but whenever it came to either of her opposites names you had it all smashed together, Nightglimmer would probably be Night Glimmer and the only way I've ever seen it before this is Dusk Shine. If it was ment to all be one word from the get go then that's up to you it just felt off to me. Other than that I am greatly enjoying the story!
5529514 Noted. Error on my Part. Twilight Sparkle and Dusk Shine. this will help on my next chapter. Pinkie Pie and Bubble Berry.
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Glad to be of assistance!
Pinkie in next chapter. The story seems to be lading to that and I fell it would help the story progress.
O nvmnd you already said that.
Berry and Pinkie have such a sweet relationship.
5538145 Oooohooo you! I seee what you did there. -goes to kill the script writer.-
I'd say probably Dash next simply with how impatient she is, either that or Rarity. Unless the two eggheads decide to see if magic can give them a female baby dragon?
5538379 Wonderful ideas! Also I have been thinking about extra chapters if I get good enough feedback. Just need to know which OC characters to do. Right now I have Spike, Rainbow, and Rarity from you I'd like to know who else wants one of those three.
this has got to be one of the strangest clops iv'e ever read but I like it.
I would think maybe Rarity next?
Lots of sappy poems and love confessions with Elusive. Though Rarity being a lady and all that, it wouldn't be polite to 'bed' with a stallion on the first night, hope you find a way to work around that.
Great story though, Congrats ;3
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Oh I just think Dash and Rarity would be the most impatient to see this through and therefore logically next. If we're going by who I want to see next then it's Dash or AJ. lol
5541325 Four choices.......I'm panicking! HELP ME!
5539763 How so anime bro? I'd like to know so that I may continue to improve?
I need more
5545759 o.0....Yes mastah.........-goes to type like an undead zombie no food or sleep for the weary.-
Dash next!
And coming up next, I gots two letters for ya.... AJ
5559447 Did you like Rainbow's chapter?
Totally love this story.
But i simply can not decide who I'd like to see next.
I hope this does not end when the Mane Six have their partners.
5559714 This doesn't have to end. So far I haven't gotten feedback on other characters besides the main six. Let me know. I'd love to do Big Mac in one of my bonus chapters.
You deserve a mustache for that.
5559910 0.o Yeah I don't wanna end up like this dude. sanitaryum.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/Forehead-Mustache.jpg
So I'm giving it to my cat, Kermit. Say hello Kermit! http://cdn.tasteofawesome.com/2012/11/1/tasteofawesome.com_303228_1352505669.jpg
I'd also love AJ to be featured. I hope there's a chapter of Celestia and Luna getting their own clones.
5559984 Roger dat. http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51k5x3EiswL._SX940_.jpg Btw this is a Hint hint on my background.
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....well that and the possible mane 6 and stallions mass orgy chapter.
Indeed I did, even though I'm not huge on anal or bukkake I understand the need to mix it up.
Though this doesn't need to keep seeing a new couple every chapter to continue, going back and seeing some of the previous couples explore new stuff can work just as well
5560156 Well everything will be dependent on how good of a feedback I get from the story. So far it has just been fantastic and hearing those ideas help me with my writing for new chapters. I'll make sure to think about those ideas and see how I may construct on them for future chapters. This story is for the community so I'm glad you enjoy it.
5559910 I try hard to capture the six in their essence. So far I think I've done Pinkie Pie pretty well enough. And Twilight.
Rarity next.
I want to see Applejack's double.
Dash&Blitz is my favourite by far!
You expressed Dash's pride very well, except for the part when Blitz first got summoned, I expected Blitz to make the first move, but this is still amazing!
These stories are (pardon my language) FUCKING AMAZING. I would very much like to see Rarity next. Plus this is already quite in my favor, anal is really really awesome.
5561703 I'm very happy you have come to love my newest chapter. What details of the story did you like in particular just the sex?