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Dash arrives at her new school, Canterlot High, and and is greeted with the most popular boy around, Blitz. They both soon becomes best friends due to their similar love for sport, but then, Blitz wants more than just a friend status. Will the relationship work out?
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First post! Excellent start, A few typos but hey. Everyone does it.
Also for a name I was thinking "Double Rainbow" Though it's more of a trollish meme saying rather than a good story title.
Sooo my ideas for a title is.
1-Matching Sneakers.
2-Colorful Days
3-Match-racing
4-Bring it
5-Rainbows Collide
I really like it! It's amazing :3
I'm a really big Dash and Blitz fan so... Yep! Keep it up!
Awesome! Please make moar
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Thx for the advice! I think Double Rainbow is overused, and my friend helped me think up a title :3
I really like your chapter title! I think I might start naming the chapters, I have so many ideas for chapter 2! Thank you for your support!
Hmm, my second favorite genderbend shipping (my first being Butterdash), excellent characterization and good grammar and spelling... Instant fave, like and watch! Awesome story so far! Keep it up, bro!
Nice beginning for the story.
I like your beginning, i hope to see more.
"yo Blitz who's the new chick".
Hmm...did you take this fic down and rewrite it? I swear I've read this first chapter before.
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Thx :3 I will try keep to keep it up! Thank you for the support!
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Really? I just would like to reassure you that this story is entirely written from my brain :3 With some inspiration from Dash&Blitz fanart from Deviantart, I understand you being cautious :3
I swear I've seen a chapter like this before.
5646232 I'm not being cautious, I'm being paranoid. I swear, I have read this before!
Am I losing my mind!?
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Really? From where?
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I haven't, I wrote this on a Google Doc, and copy pasted it onto Finfiction.net, I am currently planning chapter 2 :3 hope you will still continue reading!
5646808 SO I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE!
We share a common insanity!
5648101 I'll continue reading for sure, I'm just having a small mental crisis.
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I think it may be from this one random story where an OC goes to CHS and this thing happens. He and Dash in a later chapter have a race on skates down a hill and Dash gets hurt.
It ended around there last time I checked around 10,000 words. But this was months ago.
5653254 Eh, seems like a legit explanation.
OMGGGGGGGGGG ITS SHO GOOOOOOOD. MAKEEEEE MOOOOOOOAR PLZZZZZ
Good story.
5657648 Thx :3 I try... I love your stories too!
5653524 Thank you! I'm a terribly slow writer and editor, Chapter two should be out around a week and a half from now... So sorry for the wait :3
sooooooooooooooooo awesome
This looks good
Doesn't Dash have a pet tortoise? Not a turtle?
I mean, there re completely different animals!
Nice chapter.
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Lol, she does, but she thinks its a turtle, and when Fluttershy actually sees Tank... Lets just say Rainbows about to get a lecture :3
5683571 your story is completely awesome
5683753 Thank You! I'll be sure to post chapter 3 soon!
5683762 no prob and yea I would love to read there is not enough dashblitz on this site
Don't forget it's high school not elementary school.
5695195 Oh! Thank you for telling me! What would be the proper term? Interval I think?
5695227 I believe so, yea. Neat job on this fic so far, just do a little touching up and I think you'll have a really good one.
5695307 Thank you! Chapter 3 should be out by Saturday :3
5695319 No prob, just trying to give critiques where needed.
Chapter titles don't matter, don't try and force yourself to think of one each time, there's no point.
Great chapter. I wonder how the girls interacted with Blitz on the past.
5709291 Thank you~
5709351 You'll find out later :3
meow
Just kiss already! My inner hopeless romantic is dying!
5735325 X3 Moar torture....
Lol... I'm sorry, I want it to be like a slice of life sorta thing, but the storyline will get better!
5735456 the story is awesome but I don't get it was rarity like blitz's girlfriend and then they broke up or twilight is his girlfriend I don't get it
5736361 The next chapter will explain a few things,
But I'll tell you that Rarity once liked Blitz, but then something happened which caused her to hate him... I promise clop :3
But I dont like writing clop that much... But anything for you guys!
I hope you don't mind me pointing out a couple typos.
5737060 no no NO NEVER WRITE CLOP EVER TE STORY WILL BE A MESS sorry I just don't like clop
5740656 I don't mind :3 I like to learn from my mistakes
5740707 Soweeee X3 Just a little bit of clop, I'll do a short review on the chapter after it... But that won't be in a LONG time! Keep on reading?
5741862 K.
This should have a period.
These are what I found.