• Member Since 8th Dec, 2014
  • offline last seen Mar 23rd, 2018

VitalSpark


Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.

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This is a romance/comedy starring the Great and Adorable Trixie. :trixieshiftright:

Although it's partly a shipping story (with Comet Tail), it's mostly just Trixie being d'awwsome.

Thanks to yellowstripedflutterbat, and cotton and Ezio from mlpforums.com for reading an earlier draft and offering me their feedback. Any remaining problems are entirely my doing! :raritywink:

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Heh, all part of the plan, as Trixie would say.

Mostly slapstick, but I was in the mood for it. Nice to see something go right for her in the end.

Nice work!

Haha, that was funny and sweet all at once! :twilightsmile:
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... And now oddly enough I'm kind of hungry, :twilightoops:

Daaaaaaw. :twilightsmile:

That was really cute.

This was utterly adorable. I read it a few times for good measure.

5684040 Reading it multiple times also helps you memorize the recipe in case a pony ever visits your house and wants feeding. :rainbowwild:

5684045 - Hopefully I cook a little better than Trixie~

Still, I quite liked it. I followed your for your Apple Fritter story (Best BG Pony btw) But this was perfect. I await your next masterpiece.

You probably shouldn't use emotes in your description. Or in your story at all. It's usually best to save them for forum posts/comments, as using them in your stories looks unprofessional. :twistnerd:

5686567 Thanks — I have updated description. :scootangel:

Wow, you just made me a Trixie fan.:trixieshiftright: A great and cute story, by the way!:heart:

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::heart:
*dies
I'm just the best at useful comments, right?:trollestia:

Anyway, I see a trend here. Either funny nsfw or fluff.I do like the fluff!:rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:

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Anyway, I see a trend here. Either funny nsfw or fluff.

Early on, sure. I branch out a bit later — some troll fics, some slice of life, some less cutesy sex, etc. My fluffy romances do tend to be well-received though.

It was sweet and cute, I hope Comet Tail doesn't ask for dessert. Who knows, what would have happened.

This was very funny. I hope it gets a sequel, maybe NSFW.

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