A very special night was here. Twist's wonderful friend was coming and she wasn't going to let it go by without making her signature dessert, just for her. But when it doesn't go as planned, she begins to think that maybe she was wrong about everything.
This is very well-written. I think there should be a slice-of-life tag.
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Thank you very much. If I may ask, why do you think it should have that?
Welcome to the Twist! group!
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I'll have to add it to some other groups as well, I think...
5461607 You describe cooking and candies for most of your story. This is a level of mundane realism that turns my focus towards simple things in life that I don't often think about. I'm pretty sure that's slice of life.
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Cool. Thanks for reading.
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I'll go ahead and add it I guess. Thanks for your input.
Wow, I should really learn to write slice of life stories like you did here. Well written, and you even got Elric to place your story in the Twist Group. Amazing!^^
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Your comments are appreciated. Thanks.
5481482 Oh, you are most certainly welcome. :)
Sounds like a good teacher.
If she's designing them tonight, then I doubt they will be anything more than samplings tomorrow.
It's what a teacher does.
Just how old is Twist? I don't have a problem with foalcon, just curious.
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But they will still be surprised by how good they are.
I don't know how old the foals are in the show. I guessed anywhere from 12 to 14.