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Applebloom gets her cutie mark and suddenly Twist is the enemy. The butt of every joke, she slowly sinks into a depression that nopony her age should ever have to deal with. This is her diary.
Just a little one-shot. This is my first sad story so give me criticism if you don't like it. Be brutal, I can take it.
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Whoa... whoa whoa whoa.
Why are my eyes leaking?
Oh no... Now I feel bad for hating Twist. I'm sorry, Twist, I'm sorry!
4237147 Why would you hate Twist
she is adorable. Look at this face 
look at it!!!
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She's just a bit too annoying. But I'm sorry, Twist! Forgive me!
So did twist actually kill herself? I was in that situation once. thinking about suicide. and I don't need fan fiction to remind me of that. so, for the first time, I downvote.
4240554 I've been there too. That's what inspired this story. Writing brought up some sad feels, but that's kind of the point of a sad story right?
I have now deemed you an awesome writer and Bon Bon bisexual.
(Why did I write and post this? 
)
(Doctor Who, S6E12)
Not sure if this was intentional or what...
Not sure whether to laugh or cry.
Calling Twist that names suggests they don't know what it means either.
There is nothing wrong with your lisp Twist.
Scoots needs to be loved then. Twist should remind Scoots that she's a wonderful filly.
If you do that, you have ONE punch Twist. Don't waste it.
There is nothing wrong with being a nerd Twist. I am really liking this 'Scootaloo the bad chick'en thing.
There are stories with Applebloom making Twist a member of the CMC because 'it's about helping others get their Marks too'.
What is Scoots problem today?
This is going down hill since the beginning.
That is not true.
Stupid little girl. And you don't go to paradise if you intentionally send yourself there.
Other ponies would if you wanted them too.
I have a feeling this is just going to get worse.
But she IS a B-word. And Cheerilee doesn't hate you Twist, she's worried about you.
You suck dicks! Now, maybe she could have died as an old lady happily in bed or something, but that was not my first impression.
This got dark faster than I expected. The writing scale is childish and rushed, but what I would expect from a child about her age, so good work on that. You should go about separating the entries from each other. They seem to jump each paragraph and it's a little unsettling. But again, what I could expect from a kid her age. Those are my comments, as constructive as they are, or are not.