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The Incredibly Cliché Story of Gummy the Gator

Gummy goes missing one day. Pinkie enlists the help of her friends to find him.

Disclaimer: most cliché story ever.

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Sparkers16

Sparkers16 #1 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·

D'aw!

Probably Terrible

Probably Terrible #2 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·

What a cute little story! You captured Pinkie's spontaneous weird in a pretty good way, and that can be pretty hard to do without going overboard, so, nice job!

Bluegrass Brooke

Bluegrass Brooke #3 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·

An enjoyable read, and very cute. Thanks for posting!

sunnybun

sunnybun #4 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·

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Omgomomg I'm seeing Doctor Who references EEVVERRRYWHERERERERE!

PinkiePieOverlordOf All

PinkiePieOverlordOf All #5 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·

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4253363 Thank you all!!! I can't believe anyone liked it! I know its short, but I didn't intend to make anything more than a cheap little one shot

Empirical Deduction

Empirical Deduction #6 · Apr 19th, 2014 · · ·

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It's quite satisfactory for what it is; the writing is nice, the plot is sweet and simple, and there is no pretension; it is not exactly minimalistic, but rather it fits its chosen role well.

If I may make a suggestion, it is presently labeled "incomplete"; if you don't intend to write further on the topic, you may want to change that.

PinkiePieOverlordOf All