Twist had always dreamed of growing up into a beautiful mare, buying herself a store in Manehattan, and calmly living her life. Now that the dream has been fulfilled, Twist has nothing she could ever want more from anypony or anything anywhere.........Well, maybe just one thing.
Art is not mine, credit goes to this guy. TwistxFeatherweight. Also, please continue this way for a description of the anthropomorphic body of a pony in this shipfic. As you can see here, the ponies have their equine heads from the original show. As we follow downward, we can see that the ponies have a human chest, their bodies are still covered completely in fur though. They also have the standard human arms, also covered in fur besides the nails. And now we come to the legs. The legs are the same as a normal equine pony, except more in the look of a human world horse.
Proofreadead by SuperPinkBrony12.
Reasons for (dis)likes are encouraged.
Just an FYI, the proper terminology for legs describing a horse is unguligrade. Humans are plantigrade, and animals such as dogs and cats are digitigrade.
4196345 Thanks for the info.
So... this is Pebble?
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4196888 Eat your heart out Gummy.
4196888 Yep, just a more teenage Spike.
4197725 For some reason, I imagine shipping them.
So, just out of curiosity, is she like a centaur? You know hooved on her down parts (legs and feet) and human chested from the top, even if with a horse head? It sure is a strange mixture.
I like where this is going, as you know Feather x Twist is one of the pairs I do, mostly because some girl on the internet requested it, but I grew to enjoy the pair, I mean, it's...peculiar, but they're both (in the show), very shy foals who are background ponies and rarely talk, I can see it working, as for the story, well obviously she has grown and so has he, they must have stories to tell to each other, I can't wait for next chapter. Favorite!
4212223 Think of a Minotaur, but not exact.
4213924 Oh sure, I get it now, thank you!
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A friendly point-out, your cover-art is from the talented DeviantArt(ist) sherwoodwhisper.
So now you can properly credit him and Source Link the image.
Hmm Twist you really did a one eighty.
Power up from all sides.
Two point five.
That tell content is high.
Just reading your short bio for this story gave me an amazing idea for a story! It's nothing like this though, and I'll make sure you get noticed!
5854482 That's great! Notify me when you publish it?
This is really interesting, and the way you write! I've never seen anything like it.
Also, three nights ago, I dreamt about the place Twist was walking by, in your picture, but it was really dark and gloomy. I get these things a lot, but that really creeped me out... It did't subtract from your story though! It was amazing! You have a gift in writing! Although there were some grammatical errors, like I'm pretty sure that if there was one person talking, then another, they'd each have there own lines. Other than that, this story certainly doesn't get enough credit!
5855093 Sure :D
You're nice! I like you!
(Sorry if that was awkward... Kinda my special talent...)
5855097 Thanks a bunch, I'm still working in the next chapter to this! I've always felt this could become a great story to write, just because it gives me a chance to describe food, which is always going to be my favorite sensory detail for all time. Price of loving cooking I suppose. Not much of a punishment if you ask me.
5855103 Awkward is adorable('least in my book), and it being your special talent helps strengthen what others would commonly call a weakness. Thank you for being so kind as well.