Tom was a regular boulder. Now, he's a sentient being, and Rarity isn't happy about it. At all. Note: mostly comedy at this point, but it will slowly morph into a romance and then a sadfic. You have been warned. I'm not giving out tissues.
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This is so random!!!
I LOVE IT
523666 Thank ya kindly, good sirrah!
MOAR! MOAR I SAY! THESE BALLADS ARE AWESOME!
LOL. this is interesting. keep it comin'
523727 lol, we'll see if you still say that at the end.....
523735
so much foreboding! why!?
523757 because I've dreaded writing this for so long! I have it planned out but knowing where it's going makes me all
I originally was going to make it a one-shot but I figured I wouldn't ever finish it if I did...
523770 Ok... lets see what you can do...Come at me fic!
Oh my gods YES!
523803 I think you mean Celestias
or goddesses...
A thumb from me good sir
523924I think this is my best 'perfect thumb streak' yet... Be this news I'm getting better?
524236 U JINXED IT
524489 NOOOOOO WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!? *looks at likes* nevermind still on the rise...
524509 OK, good fro you, I guess...
524581
524641 Don't tempt it...
A Tom fic?
I have to read this later.
524681livin' on teh edge!
524697
crazy for Tom are we? 
524839
He's a hunk of a diamond, by the way RarityxTom=OTP:
524985 Dun worry, there'll be some 'o that in this one soon enough
Ah, oh hai der Tom.
Well, I read it. Now all I can think is....
What the shed.
543810 ... is that good or bad, oh great one? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
546300 First off, don't call me "great". There are authors much greater than I, and if you must seek someone's approval, do not seek mine.
That said, the dialogue is a little awkward, events happen suddenly and then are over, and the whole thing seems a little rushed.
Oh, and you should really have a maximum of one "!" and one "?" at the end of a sentence. Three of each is too many. Way too many.
548783 someone can't take a joke
only great one around here is me. ...hint: that was a joke too.
I agree, it wasn't my best work... I know I always mess some things up, so I've decided to do some challenge writing type things to improve...
...but not on the weekend. I never do any writing on the weekend. ...DONT JUDGE ME