Wait, Cthulhu is a brony? We're talking aout the destruction god Cthulhu right, not some weirdly named dude, right? ...wow. So Cthulhu is taken to Equestria apparently and... Oh, just read the story. I have better things than to type up a long description of all this craziness. Just... read it.
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Damnit. This fic was looking promising until the dialogue hit.
Keep the first 6 paragraphs and rewrite everything else, and then message me when you are done. I want to read this, just... not this.
The description was enough to make me read it.
Here I go! *Adventure Time face*
EDIT: Pretty funny. The cult thing reminded me of Friendship Is Witchcraft. I give you the honor of being favorited <3
well that reading sure did take a long time with all the laughing. Good work.
Eh..it was ok. not my thing i guess.
cults CULTS EVERYWHERE
Looks like someone watched South Park.
I'll give this a track... Errr... Favorite, no uhhhh... Read later! I'll add this to my read later list! Yea, still getting used to a few of the changes. What do you do when a story isn't favorite quality but you want to follow it? Just put it in Read Later I assume?
I like where this is going..keep it up!
"Help me Cthulhu!"
Never thought I'd hear Spike say that...
I'm afraid to read this...
I think I can hear H. P. Lovecraft spinning in his grave.
Oh god, I think I can sense something stirring on the other side of the fourth wall... Yog-Sothoth save us all....
I'm not good with words to describe how I feel about this, so instead here's RBD doing my exact facial expression:
Cthulhu's a brony? Oh boy, I'd hate to be an anti brony right now.
After finding out Cthulhu won, Zalgo was pissed.
*reads comments* ok... uh... I'm unsure whether to change or keep stuff...
404569 if you could be a bit more specific please.. why don't you like the dialogue, etc. I agree it's a bit off... I can never quite tell why though... part of it is I have a hard time pinning down how exactly Twi speaks...
404570 That was partly my inspiration, at least for the cult thing... the Cthulhu? No clue. I should see a therapist......
404722 ironic thing: never read anything to do with Cthulhu before. I'm waiting for someone who has to come and grill me on getting all my facts wrong.
404847 don't worry, in this alternate universe thing, he's already killed them all. Anti-bronies, you mad?
This is not the fic I was looking for.
Not that it's bad, mind you, just... Not what I thought.
404982 it happens.
not your average Lovecraft story fo sho'.
Interesting... definitely worth a watch. Looking good so far, but I struggle to think what more jokes you could come up with. Beyond cults and destroying, there's very little I can see working with this.
405336 hahaha, my friend, you underestimate the mind of a crazy person. I came up with a story about liver eating zebra zombies vs mane 6, I think I can keep Cthulhu visiting the ponies funny.
Nyarlathotep must be laughing his ass off if he is reading this
405392 ...some Lovecraft character I guess? dunno lolfail @ me
I would like to see a Cthulu vs. Celestia scene.
405477 Put it this way, if Cthulhu is the god of destuction, Nyarlathotep is the god of Chaos. He is the Discord of Lovecraft
I liked it, just still tryin' to figure out how to even pronounce "Cthulhu"... XD
407472 ah, makes sense.
407552 coo-thoo-loo. I think. That's how I've always heard it.
407003 that can be arranged...
407750 I honestly would have found it fucking hilarious if Twilight had been part of the cult, but this was quite comical that she was the only one NOT in it. Tracked and favorited. For you, a
P.S.: I have read the actual Necronomicon, and it can also be spelled KUTULU (koo-TOO-loo) Interestin stuff that book. Crazy shit gone down in its mythos, like brain-rending crazy
415112 yup, pretty crazy stuff. I tried readin some of it, but I couldn't handle the writing. A little different from my usual, was actually hard to understand most of it... I thought it fitting at least SHE not be in on it, seeing as she brought him there... Question, should I be spelling it that way, or is either way fine?
Beings you based his description and everything off the Lovecraftian version (the Necronomicon version is more like an emaciated corpse), stick with your current spelling. *looks at prfoile pic* And yes. Yes I am jelly.
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well, since you answered my question, you get a sneak peak at what craziness'll be coming up next... Gimme a sec and I'll PM ya...
415134 And for the hell of it, the only thing Lovecraft got right is that he's underground and part of the ancient ones. But this was a funny read, only topped by "One Day In Equestria..." in terms of laughs. Of course, there was no coherent plot, and it was as if someone puked every fucking meme in existence into a single story so...
*shrug*
teh other story I meant
415175 lol thought you meant mine, I was like '...but... was my plot that bad
'
I believe that may have been one of the greatest things I have ever read.
437459
Funny story, I read you comment and was about to say "quite", but then I saw your avatar. Good show sir!
437459 why thank 'ee. *bows* so, did ya like the plot of the special or chapter 1 better eh?
If you liked this I have plenty of ideas... Cthulhu vs Lauren Faust
Cthulhu vs Discord! Cthulhu vs Nightmare Moon! Cthulhu vs Celestia! ...you get the picture. ...kinda unsure with where to go with the actual plot 
The nonsensical antics of Cthulhu intrigues me so. Do continue writing this. I am a big Lovecraft fan, but you really don't need to read Call of Cthulhu, unless you want to make an inside joke pertaining to it. Otherwise, no offense to Howard, you aren't missing much.
438359 hahaha, thanks! So, did you like the first or second chapter's plot better eh?
...no one seems to be telling me.
Also... ONLY 20 views? Really? ...I guess that's what I get for having one story that people read and the rest all but ignored. Maybe I'm just being impatient but day-um! Everyone who is still following my tiny pony story has no taste in literature, not even sure why they are...
438258
I'm not particularly sure honestly. I don't think making it centered around a VS scheme would be a great idea. I would go with a traditional story with fun things like this thrown in every now and then. One thing I would like to mention is that I believe that you portrayed Cthulhu in a much more entertaining way this chapter. I'm unsure as if that has anything to do with the focus of this chapter versus the other one, but he does seem to flow better. That said I'm very excited to see where this story is going. Good luck author!
438258 Simple. Incorporate that INTO the plot! Good show once again, sir
439613THE PLOT HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
...is it just me, or does there seem to be a word missing to make this sentence work when Pinkie Pie asks, "And we can whole giant chocolate sculptures of him?"
439638 oops, I'll fix that. That's the problem with having no pre-readers: I'm good enough to usually get it right, and I don't want to wait for them to read it to post it... oh well.
I have to say, the first person starting chapter transferring over to a third person second chapter was extremely refreshing. You really have out done yourself, especially when getting pinkie to kill the Easter bunny. (I hated that rabbit.) Anyways... I enjoyed the episode, and am now having an idea between a friendly competition between Coop and M.E.G.A.S. from Megas XLR, and Cthulhu. The idea just popped up so... yeah... sounds like an idea or something.
446448 oh gosh, reading that comment literally made my day. "especially when getting pinkie to kill the Easter bunny. (I hated that rabbit.)" I laughed so hard if my roommates were in the same room they be giving my odd looks, and that doesn't exactly happen often. Good show young sir!
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As you can see I am simply one hell of a commenter.
446476 apparently.
Something tells me that Luna and Cthulhu will get along very well.
Wait, all of my wat?
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I look forward to seeing where this is headed. Also, first. :P