A comedy story I've made where the Mane 6 fight zombies somewhat randomly. Rated teen just to be safe - extremely light gore.
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317779 That good eh? Thoughts? Ways to improve? And most importantly: should I continue? Hasn't gotten many views
its good if your going for a zombie feeling but i just have a weak stomach mabye slowly have the team killed over time? ps this is another great story but please work on ponies are magic
Taken from my blog post: "as for my other stories, with the zombie zebras it seems no one really cares, so I'm going to put it on hiatus. Shame, really, it was my personal favorite and (I personally think) my best written. If you think I should take it back up tell me in the comments."
So... if you liked it and think I should continue, tell me!
OHHHH!Continuation!Contine,continue,continue,continue,continue,continue,continue,continue!
(Continuation IS a word ehm?
)
395577 no clue. I think this is my best work yet, personnally. Shame so few read it... I'm hoping maybe if I get featured it might get some recognition and I'll complete it... Maybe I should just finish it... not sure, I'm kind of unsure what direction I should go with it..... oh well...
Not much of a story here, to be honest. It feels all over the place as if it couldn't decide whether to be a comedy romzomcom or a gore fic. If you're going to flesh it out, at least include a proper intro.
That last scene where Spike was crushed was mildly unamusing.
425117 Really, it was more of a 'random fic' then anything... It was actually my first fanfiction I did, just took me a while to upload it. Personally, I prefer my 'Cthulhu in Equestria' story...
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Heh. Might I direct you to this guide?
It certainly helped me during my writing of Pony Effect, and I believe it would be a must-read to any aspiring writer. Will be reading your Cthulhu story later.