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Ragabash
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Ragabash
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A candy cane cock. That's awesome.
Also, despite being a fellow competitor in Kloudmutt's contest, I enjoyed this very much. In fact, of the three currently submitted, I thought this was the best. Best of luck to you.
I clop fic you say?
*Feature senses tingling*
Anyways, it was good! Well done.
Complete smut, but there's nothing wrong with that. Could use another round of editing though, there were a few typos that slipped in.
I (personally) felt that it could have been longer, with more detail, but it wasn't bad by any means.
I need the link to the full art.
...For science reasons
It's a DICK IN A BOX.
5433317 Kloudmutt.
I know this because of previous research.
5433628 aww. I was going to make that reference.
Yay! Well done. Thinking about making a sequel with Apple Jack in it?
5435641
The sex was a bit rushed, you didn't elaborate on the feelings or intensity as much as you could have. I feel like that would have made the experience more enjoyable for the reader. Also, there are several instances where you use the same word repeatedly within a sentence block, and this line "Coming with a loud moan, she shot many large jets of semen into her." could have been improved.
Just my thoughts.
Short and vary enjoyable.
Man. This could be so good. But the cumflation scene needs to be more than five sentences to justify the tag.
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I seriously want to come back to this story in a month and see what you can do with it. You clearly have the talent. I don't care if the holiday has passed. Everyday is a good day for futa Rarity!
could be better
This was nice. It could be better, but I like and am okay with what is written. And it's good enough in my opinion if I had to use this for reference in my future writings. Also congratulations, this happens to be my fifth read story on this site.
You should still just write New Year just to finish off this story with a three way.
Concordo com o Grayclown e curto mas interesante a primeira historia