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Julia


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See, it's funny 'cause it's a play on the story that came before it.
Heee.
Quick, say something funny!
Uhhh... alright. So, a there's this department store that has six floors, and-
No, not a joke, something else! A funny word! Like Kumquat or chimichanga or pickle barrel or-
Genitalia? Is... is that funny?
...No. Eew.
Screw off, Pinkie.
~TOOWC

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lolz, i hope ya enjoyed it:yay::heart:

Hooooly shit. Boner....... Engage!!! I a,so like blood in pussies......... Jk..... Maybe?

As usual you clop writers fail in biology and sex.

You wouldn't know it but I'm blushing something fierce under this helmet

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Lol I didn't mean all clop writers are bad. There's much humor in the statement. but the whole invading the womb thing is so overused and so misinformed. Maybe its just me being into anatomically correct sex that doesn't make me cringe from the pain when people do certain things.

Its just when I read some clop I can see that yeah either this person is a virgin or they're adding this part because of the fetish that people have for it.

Heh, man. Stories about guys with tits always have the most amusing names xP
Seems like Shy will get himself into quite the few porn tropes in this one :P

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Yeah I mean christ sake, pick up a biology book or take a sex class or something. If you're entering a womb, you're causing gods only know pain.

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>Caring about pointless things in a story made purely for sexual release.

Bunch of normies, the lot of you

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so, you don't like cervical penetration?:rainbowhuh:

futa clop isn't for you then:rainbowkiss:

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I didn't read this, I was just here to add information and go.

Bye, have a nice day, and all that!

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Not all of them does it though. There are people mindful of how sex works.

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But... how is my fetish a problem?:unsuresweetie:

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Not a problem in that way. I was just trying to say that it was overused and it doesn't make sense biological and it takes away from the story.

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then write a better one, kay?:rainbowkiss:

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Uugh you're not even trying. You do one better is not only decades if not centuries old its not even an argument. Its not a matter of doing better. I easily could and it could be anatomically correct not to mention not have the other mare suddenly become a whore and react realistically, but that would be a boner kill and highly OOC.

This kind of plot can not work without actually planning and putting a lot of time into it. Especially in the form of onehsot and I am too busy with my story to take time to prove a point. Pointing out a biological fault does not make me a bad person.

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Flutterbat Has A Huge Meaty Dick

What were you expecting?:unsuresweetie:

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Now I said nothing about the futa nature of it did I? You're taking the statement too broad. All I'm saying is that this particular fetish is a biological fallacy because since you went out of the way to make them anthro you decided to write them taking after humans to some degree.

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Even if I had made them completely pony or completely human, or even centaurs for Faust's sake, I would've wrote the fetish in there. I'm just confused at how this is such a big problem for you.:rainbowhuh:

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Don't read if you don't like that kind of fetish sir. Every one has a fetish! (Insert everyone has a fetish song from American dad here.)

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All I'm saying for me its a bad fetish and that it sucks that its overused. That was the onl point I was making. You posted the story for people to read and give feedback/opinions/reviews right? Well that's what I did.

I'm not seeing the problem here myself. Not everyone is going to give likes, glowing praise, and approvals. Thats the risk you take when you post stuff.

I didn't shit on the pairing, your story, or the fact you choose futa. I never mentioned the futa or if I did my comment was just focused on the entering the womb thing being biologically terrible. I was never condeming the futa usage.

6359111 You're misreading the situation and didn't pay close enough attention.

I never condemned the futa part. Just the whole breaking into the womb aspect. There being futa here had nothing to do with the aspect I found cringeworthy.

More accurately, she would firmly do that with her big, meaty dick.

*ding*

Roll credits!

And then of course fuck the living shit out of it.

Wow.


EDIT:
I really hope nopony I know discovers this comment.... hehehehe

she began to ejaculate literal exploding cum globs

So FlutterBat has explosive cum now? Rarity's body is already mangled horribly what with the womb-enterring, but now she gets cum exploding inside her too? Yeowch.

Who else came here for the title? Also, that pic, hnnng.


6358297 It kinda scares me that is an actual thing. The cervical penetration, I mean.

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That picture is from highschool DxD just with Fluttershy instead.

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If you're not familiar with eris, this is what he does. If you don't like it, please do us all a big fucking favor and listen to what fluttershy and twilight have to say.
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6362926 For fucks sake will you people fucking listen.

I was not telling her not to do the fucking Futa.
I had no god damn problem with the futa.

So stop white knighting or missing the fucking point of a simple observation I made. Jesus christ do you see me going on all our stories, making negative comments, and pointing out a bunch of bs?

No. I just made an observation of how a certain thing/concept used in this one fic is prevalent and from my own perspective not that good.

Just let it go.

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No. I just made an observation of how a certain thing/concept used in this one fic is prevalent and from my own perspective not that good.

What part of,

AND STAY THE FUCK OUT

did you not understand.
Eris is our goddess.

6362950 I'm done. Its a forgone conclusion you "fans" won't tolerate any logic or people have different opinions from yours.

I'm convinced that futa is a fetish straight men engage in to cloak their thinly veiled homosexuality. Being gay is fine, brohammy. Removing them in place of cock is peeking out of the closet.

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I'll be honest. A dick's cum is a great part of many fetishes of mine.

And who doesn't love a good dick?:ajsmug:

KO so flutterbat is gonna have some sex time with her other friends.

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Spoiler Alert: Nope, just Applejack.

Ko I'll take that as a yes be looking forward to it.

She no longer wanted to sleep, she needed sex; She no longer wanted to turn back to normal, she needed sex; She no longer wanted for this to stop and turn into a bright day with sunshine and rainbows, no! She needed sex.

:derpyderp1:

It wad far too late to turn back now.

was

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i'll find that error and correct it... soon:trollestia:

Biology is always trying to ruin my fetishes but I won't let it win. Everything about this story was perfect in my books.

rarity worked with what she was given to seduce her customers into buying more dresses from her

You know, generosity

6357366 Hear hear.
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"Th-that's enough, darling! Please, no more...!" Rarity cried, biting the knuckle of her index finger in anxiety. Her legs know weakly wrapping around Fluttershy's waist. "I... I simply don't know if you can even possibly fit more of that monster into me!" Rarity smiled dimly, her eyes narrowed as she lightly began to pant.

Great story, but I think that's an error... Thought I'd mention it.

Damn. now i feel like writing a fic where the consequences for what flutterbat did (aka impregnating rarity and applejack, with a scene showing aj's impregnation) are brought to light.

6364875 I can tell you I thoroughly am attracted to women, and the reason I enjoy futa is because of that. I prefer women aesthetics, while still preferring the act of hardcore sex, futa is an option where I can get both.

6364875 isn't that saying that I like watching a girl with a strap on fuck another girl, gay? But The other guy that responded to you. He pretty much nailed it on the head for why I enjoyed it.

6859681 don't worry, he's a huge troll on futa fics. Almost every such fic I've read, he's there with a negative comment.

Spiderpony? Superpony? Because Batpony came and she was only here to help herself.

This made me lol. Something about superhero jokes always get to me:rainbowlaugh:

So any chance that getting fucked by a Herm Batpony will turn other mares into batponies too or what, also will any mare that Flutterbat bangs will they end up pregnant with her foals?

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