• Member Since 19th Jul, 2015
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Rainbow Chaser


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Nice. One question though. If the reverse spell is so powerful that only an alicorn can use it, how does the performer in Las Pegasus do it?

Finally a Futa Trixie clopfic! :heart:

6998938 It shall forever be an elusive mystery :pinkiecrazy:

6998940 glad you like it! ^-^

6998953 :duck: What does my male counterpart have to do with--oh nevermind.

You have my attention. :rainbowwild:

6999134 good to know! Hope you liked it! :raritystarry:

The technical term is autofellatio

You're missing a bracket in the summary.

6998940 Have you ever been here?

hmm... it was okay, but it went way too fast. you need to spend some more time on certain parts. like you went out of your way to say how big their balls/dicks were, but didn't give any attention to how it felt to have such a huge dick spreading them apart, how it felt to be so thoroughly stuffed by such a huge rod of maremeat. and you practically just skipped over when they actually came, nothing said at all about how large a load it was, or again, what it felt like to have a huge load of hot creamy marejizz bloating them up.

6999875 I'm still fairly new to writing clop. But yeah I see what you mean. I might revise this one in the near future.

massive balls smacked her inn the face.

*in

Allow me to help you with the grad finale!"

*grand

Trixie then flipped over annd twilight finished cumming all over Trixie's face and tits.

*and

6999906 oh jeeze! I didn't realize I made so many spelling mistakes! Thank you for letting me know. I'll fix those right away.

6999900
yeah, it's a common mistake new clop writers make, giving only focus to the physical when the emotional is just as, if not more, important. Just something to keep in mind for any future writing you do.

A lot of grammar errors and not enough detail, but the very end got me.

7000263 as I said I'm still new to writing clop, so it might not be top quality. But I will be taking more time on the other stories I plan to write in the near future.

6999865

Yes I have but there's just not enough Futa Trixie. :pinkiecrazy:

Spike with the "Oh helll no!" Made me laugh

Admiring Trixie's "new edition"?

i.imgflip.com/142neu.jpg

It does look look glorious.

...definitely an error

True One: Just because of that title you already got a Fav and a like, haven't laugh like that in a while, going to read it later!

-edit after reading it-

True One: I must say, wasn't expecting all, that, by the god Existence him self, holy hell, it was awesome, keep doing whatever (I don't have words to describe it) you are doing, it's great.

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