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LawWing has power, money, a mansion, and a high ranking job! But this is all starting to get to him. He has no family, few friends, and pretty much works for fun! This however, his is life story of greatness and regret. To sustain a peaceful, and great land, justice must rule-LawWing
Cover art by: Harmonic Brush!
Rated T for: Mild language, mature plotline, murder scene, and weapon violence.
Sex tag for: mild sexual comments, or mentionings.
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5416001 Yep!
5416004 Thanks, chapter 3 may just surprise you :3
5416177 Ok! Thanks. I only need one of LawWing(if you can add a brief case as a cutie mark too.)
5416212 WOW! That's quick. Thanks, I owe ya one!
5416241 It's perfect!
5416395 If you do, pm me. I want to see if you can figure it out :3
5416001 Does your comment have anything to with the story?
"I'm a Prosecutor, not a pimp" best line in the whole chapter!!!
5416667 Thanks!
"I see." she retorted. " should be "I see." she replied. " or something like that a retort is used in an argument. Like this "I saved the kittens" Joe said grinning. "You did not" Sam retorted " you were too busy flirting with mares!"
5416694 Thanks for the advice. I'll fix that right now.
5416703 You're welcome.
5416991 :D
5417009 I can't either XD heads up, LawWing is going to fail at life :3
5427470 If i could spell, yes!
What an intriguing concept! I've never considered a law / justice system in the MLP universe, but of course, a utopia is a hard ideal to maintain longterm. It am certainly hopeful that Law and Gentle will work out, as I'm an idealist, but I have a feeling in my gut that something is going to happen to the sweet mare. Law fits his role very well: serious about the job, serious about himself... until a dame walks in and turns things upside down for him!
I certainly didn't expect what happened in the courtroom - and I enjoyed the puns! "Izi? An izi? Is that... ah-ha! It is!" Poor D.A. Octavia, though...
All in all, keep up the good work and don't give up!
From where? There is no place that he could have possibly hidd–
Is there no security in Equestria at all? You know what, not going to bother.
This looks like a great mystery/trial story, it just feels a bit rushed. If you would spend a bit of time explaining the environment instead of the action, it wouldn't recieve as many downvotes.
5464895 Mk, i'll try that in my next chapter.
Hey, great story so far, I would like to point out the mistakes I just happened to notice while reading.
There should only be one a.
The i should be capitalized.
Should be you're not your.
Court House is two words.
Perhaps you mean glass?
Should be an.
I'm sorry if this offends you in any way and I apologize if it is a bit much. If you need any help editing the grammar on your stories, I would love to help you out. I've been told I have a keen eye for those kinds of things. And you did fantastic on the spelling!
Also, this story has earned my like!
5763094 Thanks for reading and correcting!