I love romances, mild gore, and comedies. I'm a new proofreader in the proof reader group. Look in there to find what i prefer to read, etc. I look forward to proofreading for you.
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"Money isn't everything," is a common phrase. But, Diamond Tiara never really got it. But on one fateful day, she finally realizes that there are something that money can't buy.
For storytelling purposes, nothing in season 5 affects this, it is an alternative situation.
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Yay, more Diamond Tiara!
Some issues you may wish to fix:
Sugarcube Corner. Just two words, not three ;)
Sweetie Belle. Like a southern belle, rather than a church bell.
For both of these, the period/full-stop before the ending quotation mark should be a comma, due to being followed by a conversation attribution.
7019483 Thanks, I'll fix these sings shortly.
Its not a bad story, it has a good message. I think it could be a bit longer though, I like the inner turmoil that DT goes though, but the resolve is a bit rushed for my tasts...